Cinderella What if
anonymous
July 15 2011, 01:12:59 UTC
we all remember how during the movie when the stepsisters ruined cinderella's dress. Well what if they did not and cinderella still went to the ball. Cinderella/Prince Charming
The Pleasure of a Dance {1/2}afterandalasiaOctober 18 2012, 12:02:57 UTC
“We will be leaving at the end of the ball, and no sooner, Cinderella. Do not expect anything else.”
“Of course now, Stepmother.”
It felt as if there was no room in her for anything other than elation, her heart feeling so light that it might break free from her chest and fly. She had learnt not to think too much of the way that her stepmother smirked at her, or how Anastasia and Drizella utterly failed to hide sniggers behind their hands. All that Cinderella cared to do was look from the window of the carriage and watch, with bated breath, the approaching castle glowing silver-blue in the moonlight.
It was not until they enter the castle without her that she began to feel flickers of concern. Not until she heard giggles from behind her, quickly hidden by fans before she could turn and see them, that she realised that something is wrong.
“Did you see her dress?”
“How heavy the fabric looks! Why, it seems almost a cretonne!”
The Pleasure of a Dance {2/2}afterandalasiaOctober 18 2012, 12:03:44 UTC
“If you wished to apologise for being in the gardens, then it is hardly necessary,” he said, as she wiped away her tears, “when I am here as well. If it was for crying, why, you have stopped; and if it was for startling so then I have only myself to blame.” His tone was so warm that she managed a faint smile. “Which must lead me to conclude that you wished to apologise for being so unimaginably beautiful as to have caught me entirely off-guard, which is certainly far from a sin
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Re: The Pleasure of a Dance {2/2}
anonymous
January 13 2013, 08:23:55 UTC
AHHH I love it! The part where Cinderella is justifying her clothing choices especially -- dawww, I just want to give her a hug. (I always did think that outfit was kinda gaudy-looking, but it still meant so much to Cinderella.)
Love your Prince! It's so nice to see Cinderella/Prince fluffiness!! Ahhh so glad I read this! Thank you for writing it. :)
Re: The Pleasure of a Dance {2/2}afterandalasiaJanuary 16 2013, 11:19:51 UTC
I know, that scene with the dress always broke my heart. I'm such a sucker for pretty dresses, and dear lord I love the silver ballgown, but Cinderella looks so happy when she appears in that pink dress that my heart breaks for her.
Heh, poor Prince, he doesn't really get much character in the original film. Twist In Time is amusing, but he's still a bit generic. I figure, what the hell, let's write a gentleman.
And thank you for reading it, and commenting! It's nice to know people enjoy it~
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“Of course now, Stepmother.”
It felt as if there was no room in her for anything other than elation, her heart feeling so light that it might break free from her chest and fly. She had learnt not to think too much of the way that her stepmother smirked at her, or how Anastasia and Drizella utterly failed to hide sniggers behind their hands. All that Cinderella cared to do was look from the window of the carriage and watch, with bated breath, the approaching castle glowing silver-blue in the moonlight.
It was not until they enter the castle without her that she began to feel flickers of concern. Not until she heard giggles from behind her, quickly hidden by fans before she could turn and see them, that she realised that something is wrong.
“Did you see her dress?”
“How heavy the fabric looks! Why, it seems almost a cretonne!”
“And those beads, where did she find those?”
“Showing her petticoats! Such a disgrace!”
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Love your Prince! It's so nice to see Cinderella/Prince fluffiness!! Ahhh so glad I read this! Thank you for writing it. :)
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Heh, poor Prince, he doesn't really get much character in the original film. Twist In Time is amusing, but he's still a bit generic. I figure, what the hell, let's write a gentleman.
And thank you for reading it, and commenting! It's nice to know people enjoy it~
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