First I have to apologize, but my mothertongue is German and I haven't found a beta till now, so every spelling and grammar mistakes you find, shall be told and I will correct them
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Leaning over the still kneeling Robert he took the other ones hand and retrieved it, then he packed the shirt and pulled it over Roberts head. He secured the hands with the shirt to the headboard and bound them there with a tight knot
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All his strength gone he shuddered and collapsed on the man beneath him who still slightly flinched from time to time. Edward felt his eyes were slowly closing and he drifted in some sort of half-sleep until he felt a kiss on the top of his head
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Edward took that as an agreement and tackled Robert on the floor, to surely know the other one wanted this gave him a thrill and clothes flew all over the room until he used some strength to press Robert down one hand on his neck the other lifted his hips. Edward ordered him to stay like this and went into the bathroom he wanted to clean Robert up before a new round could start. With a little evil smirk he walked back and was glad to see his… well he decided to call him lover, still staying in the same position he had left him. Him… his lover, his pet, his dear one, his Robert, all HIS!!!
Ffffff that was so hooooot! Looooved the rimming, holy FUCK I loved the rimming. The whole thing was hot, but if I had to pick a favorite part, DEFINITELY the rimming.
And oooh, German? I'm about to take my third German class. I speak it as well as an exceptionally dimwitted five-year-old, I think, so you've definitely beaten me. xD
You really don't know how relieved I am, that you like it AND that it seems "readable" without thinking "Oh my god, this is supossed to be Englisch?! o.O?!" :D
Und: Danke sehr, dein Deutsch scheint nicht so schlecht zu sein, wie du behauptest! ;)
Thanks for the nice comment ^^, I'm all -happy dancing round the room- right now!!!!! Probably I should write something else than smut to expand my knowledge of the English-language..... but on the other hand: naaaaah - I live to write porn :D
Edward/Robert. While Morgan and Giselle go shopping, Edward's still trying to figure out one or two things about this strange world.
LIKE ANAL SEX. AND BLOWJOBS. AND RIMMING. AND WHATEVER ELSE ANON WISHES.
AND ROBERT'S THERE TO HELP OUT!
Bonus points for mutual angsting. "I'M BETRAYING MY PRINCESS!" "KNOW HOW YOU FEEL, MAN!"
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Him… his lover, his pet, his dear one, his Robert, all HIS!!!
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And oooh, German? I'm about to take my third German class. I speak it as well as an exceptionally dimwitted five-year-old, I think, so you've definitely beaten me. xD
Die Geschichte war sehr gut! :D
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Und: Danke sehr, dein Deutsch scheint nicht so schlecht zu sein, wie du behauptest! ;)
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I don't think the grammar was too distracting. Shoot, porn isn't exactly held to a high standard of grammar. As long is gets you there, it's good. :D
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Probably I should write something else than smut to expand my knowledge of the English-language..... but on the other hand: naaaaah - I live to write porn :D
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