FILL: No Woman, No CryloosedefenseNovember 5 2010, 00:57:45 UTC
Author's Note: Okay, so long story short, ONTD was having a discussion on some really squicky Disney stuff and someone alerted me to the existence of this comm, so I had to come check it out. It's not really my thing (sorry), but then I saw this prompt and I thought it was ... for lack of better word, 'okay' enough for me to handle, so I wrote this. The tensing is a little weird, it's a mix of past and present tense, because when I wrote it, I was picturing Bobby in future reminiscing about this memory, so hopefully the language makes a bit more sense when you keep that perspective in mind.
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He’s never told anyone before, especially not the ones who matter. Truth be told, he’s aware of the fact that he’s always been a little bit strange. Stranger than he’s ever been given credit for in those younger years, certainly, from those times growing up an oddball kid in grade school who sat isolated in the corner, to the token weirdo who was in vogue and somewhat cool in the days of junior high, and then to
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Re: FILL: No Woman, No CryloosedefenseNovember 5 2010, 01:00:21 UTC
Maxie, who was always hanging out with PJ more than him, had laughed and asked, “You carry your CDs around in your bag?”
“I got a new Discman,” he had said before reaching out and pulling out the other prize he’d been planning to break out. “But that’s not all I carry around.”
“Dude!” It was a thrill to see their eyes blow up so comically like that when they realized what it was they were looking at. “You bring that shit with you to school?”
He shrugged then, and now he wishes he could have seen the mischievous smile on his face. “It’s not like I smoke it between class or anything. You wanna try?”
They’d shared uncertain looks between them then, PJ and Max, and he tried not to feel bad about it, but it was hard seeing that connection there, the silent debate they held with their eyes that he’d never understand because nobody had bothered to teach him the language.
“I don’t think we should.”
“Pete’s dad would freak,” Max agreed.
“Come on,” he’d pressed. “Your dad’s at work, you’ll be fineAnother look then, and the both of them
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Re: FILL: No Woman, No CryloosedefenseNovember 5 2010, 01:01:31 UTC
And so, like he always did whenever he felt the edges of depression scrabble at him, he changed the subject, nudging Max with his elbow and asking, “So what’s up in the love department, yo?”
Max had laughed uncomfortably and shook his head. “It’s down to zero right now. I’m hoping it doesn’t go down to negatives.”
“You’re kidding.” Maxie was the most attractive person he knew. If he wasn’t getting any… “Why?”
“What do you mean, ‘why’?” Maxie had snapped a bit harshly, so he’d held his hands up in surrender, and allowed the other boy to take his time.
“I just … I haven’t … you know … since Roxanne.”
“Since Rox- dude, you were thirteen!” There was no hiding the scandalous tone in his voice, because it truly was shocking news. He may have been a loser, but at least he’d never pined for anyone for five years(He’d only been pining for Max for about five months up to that point
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Re: FILL: No Woman, No CryloosedefenseNovember 5 2010, 01:03:03 UTC
So maybe it was a little devious and a bit underhanded, but hell, what was the point of being a teenager if you weren’t going take a few chances in the name of getting off, and as the space between them closed in and he raised his sunglasses up so that it wouldn’t get in the fucking way of the view he was about to get as he lay one on his best friend, he reasoned with himself that Maxie was fully conscious and hyperaware of what was about to happen because it would have been impossible for him not to be, because come on, he was right there, and then it was too late anyway, because his lips were puckering, and Maxie’s breathing was quickening, and suddenly they were together, and he will never forget the feel of Max’s firm, full lips as they gave way to his tongue or the small whimpers that came out of Max’s throat and went straight down to his own balls.
He wanted to feel his nipples, because God, nipples were sexy as fuck and he’d gotten a good look at Maxie’s in the locker room, bigger and rounder than his own and a slightly
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Re: FILL: No Woman, No CryloosedefenseNovember 5 2010, 01:03:56 UTC
Curling his tongue over the bulbous head before he descended too far, he relished the sensation Maxie left on his tastebuds, enjoying what he could now with the promise of more to come if ust worked for it, and so he fought with his reflex, the overwhelming urge to spit the organ out as it filled his senses more and more and take in air instead. He fought it because this was so much better
He paused when he reached the bottom, his throat dry as sandpaper, marvelling at the fact that he had actually managed to accomplish this much his first time, and that feeling was compounded further when he felt Max’s hand slowly reach down and pat his hair in reward, an encouragement to do more, so he hollowed his cheeks out and sucked making up for the lack of wetness in his mouth by increasing the pressure, and Max moaned, arching his back off the floor and impaling himself deeper into the welcoming cavern he found himself engulfed in, his grip tightening as a sort of warning that was cheerfully ignored, before crying out his release
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Re: FILL: No Woman, No CryloosedefenseNovember 9 2010, 11:50:57 UTC
Hahah thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it. If you enjoyed this piece and would like to read more, I have a few stories I've uploaded to fanfiction.net over here at my profile:
Re: FILL: No Woman, No CrymavoorikJanuary 2 2011, 10:32:14 UTC
HOLY FUCK THIS IS INCREDIBLE AND REALLY FUCKING HOT
Thank-you so much for writing this. I really liked reading from Bobby's POV, and this was just everything I wanted, and Maxie was so innocent and oh, you win.
Ahhh I can only hope that you write more. Thanks for writing the first Bobby/Max ever. Fantastic.
A Goofy Movie/An Extremely Goofy Movie: Max/Bobby. Anything! I am asking for absolutely anything.
But in terms to jog your imagination... In college Bobby is a total pothead and when he's totally baked one day he tries to put the moves on Max.
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He’s never told anyone before, especially not the ones who matter. Truth be told, he’s aware of the fact that he’s always been a little bit strange. Stranger than he’s ever been given credit for in those younger years, certainly, from those times growing up an oddball kid in grade school who sat isolated in the corner, to the token weirdo who was in vogue and somewhat cool in the days of junior high, and then to ( ... )
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“I got a new Discman,” he had said before reaching out and pulling out the other prize he’d been planning to break out. “But that’s not all I carry around.”
“Dude!” It was a thrill to see their eyes blow up so comically like that when they realized what it was they were looking at. “You bring that shit with you to school?”
He shrugged then, and now he wishes he could have seen the mischievous smile on his face. “It’s not like I smoke it between class or anything. You wanna try?”
They’d shared uncertain looks between them then, PJ and Max, and he tried not to feel bad about it, but it was hard seeing that connection there, the silent debate they held with their eyes that he’d never understand because nobody had bothered to teach him the language.
“I don’t think we should.”
“Pete’s dad would freak,” Max agreed.
“Come on,” he’d pressed. “Your dad’s at work, you’ll be fineAnother look then, and the both of them ( ... )
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Max had laughed uncomfortably and shook his head. “It’s down to zero right now. I’m hoping it doesn’t go down to negatives.”
“You’re kidding.” Maxie was the most attractive person he knew. If he wasn’t getting any… “Why?”
“What do you mean, ‘why’?” Maxie had snapped a bit harshly, so he’d held his hands up in surrender, and allowed the other boy to take his time.
“I just … I haven’t … you know … since Roxanne.”
“Since Rox- dude, you were thirteen!” There was no hiding the scandalous tone in his voice, because it truly was shocking news. He may have been a loser, but at least he’d never pined for anyone for five years(He’d only been pining for Max for about five months up to that point ( ... )
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He wanted to feel his nipples, because God, nipples were sexy as fuck and he’d gotten a good look at Maxie’s in the locker room, bigger and rounder than his own and a slightly ( ... )
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He paused when he reached the bottom, his throat dry as sandpaper, marvelling at the fact that he had actually managed to accomplish this much his first time, and that feeling was compounded further when he felt Max’s hand slowly reach down and pat his hair in reward, an encouragement to do more, so he hollowed his cheeks out and sucked making up for the lack of wetness in his mouth by increasing the pressure, and Max moaned, arching his back off the floor and impaling himself deeper into the welcoming cavern he found himself engulfed in, his grip tightening as a sort of warning that was cheerfully ignored, before crying out his release ( ... )
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Thank-you so much for writing this. I really liked reading from Bobby's POV, and this was just everything I wanted, and Maxie was so innocent and oh, you win.
Ahhh I can only hope that you write more. Thanks for writing the first Bobby/Max ever. Fantastic.
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