Comments | discoveredinalj: Fic: Interesting as Fireworks

bistokidsfan77 in discoveredinalj

Fic: Interesting as Fireworks

Nov 05, 2006 22:54

Up against it, but made in under the wire in the Pacific Time Zone, USA :D This is a sequel to my Halloween fic.

( Interesting as Fireworks )

sky rocket, bistokidsfan

Comments 18

kiwisue November 6 2006, 08:22:50 UTC

*applauds* Although I enjoy the tough stuff, it's lovely when someone knows how to spoil them properly *g* This is very nice.

bistokidsfan77 November 6 2006, 09:09:19 UTC

Ah, yes, pure spun sugar this. But, it's fun to spoil the Lads, isn't it? I'm glad you liked it.

rosie55 November 6 2006, 10:45:42 UTC

Oh yes, felt all warm and cosy by the time I'd finished this! Not sure about parkin and custard, though - but then, I'm not a hungry lad!! And we are talking about Bodie and his famous appetite. Lovely mental vision of a clean warm Doyle ensconced in the enormous bed....

bistokidsfan77 November 6 2006, 11:11:37 UTC

Yeah, warm & cozy was what I was aiming for. Seems all I can write these days is Old Marrieds Lads - so I went with it :D Thanks for the kind feedback!

przed November 6 2006, 12:11:37 UTC

Very nice! I love smug Bodie, getting the best single malt for being "thoughtful." And the last two lines are perfect.

bistokidsfan77 November 6 2006, 16:30:21 UTC

Aye, I canna resist giving the Lads the pure malt scotch, after all, *I'm* not on a budget :D Thanks for the loverly feedback!

myrebelcat November 6 2006, 12:29:00 UTC

Very cute! I loved Mrs. Dinwiddie - too funny. And also Bodie's comment about the bathroom being "like a cathedral".
Nice little tag onto the end of the last story!

bistokidsfan77 November 6 2006, 16:32:57 UTC

I had this picture of Mrs. Dinwiddie in my head - you know, the stereotypical Scottish housekeeper type, then had fun making her all soft on the Lads, feeding them up and giving them the good single malt... Just a nice warm and fuzzy to reward our poor Lads after a hard couple of days.

Thanks for the great feedback!

msmoat November 6 2006, 13:51:34 UTC

Yes, a nice coda to the first story. It's great to see the lads enjoying themselves (and each other) in luxury now and again. I can just see it. *g* I especially liked the bit where Doyle leans back into Bodie for his heat, and Bodie's arms come around Doyle and he complains about him being scrawny. I dunno, I just like that! *g*

bistokidsfan77 November 6 2006, 16:35:09 UTC

Yes, a reward for our hard working Lads - just to feel good. I like indulging them now and again. Lately, all I've been able to write is Old Marrieds fic, so I went with it! Thanks for the feedback :D