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Picture Challenge

Sep 13, 2007 08:25

Comments 20

myrebelcat September 13 2007, 17:44:08 UTC

You already know I like this story, but it's great to be able to read it again.

I think I'm most impressed that you tackled the whole concept of real and unreal and took the risk of letting the reader feel just as confused as Doyle, gradually revealing the mystery. It's a terrific plot! Thanks!

:-)

sc_fossil September 13 2007, 20:50:04 UTC

Thanks so much, Rebel. You were a wonderful help, and I appreciate that you took the time to read it again.

callistosh65 September 13 2007, 17:57:14 UTC

Yeah, I love that weird and uncertain vibe that we share with lads during this one, this story really draws the reader in. A novel idea for Pros, it's as entertaining as it is intriguing, so thanks! What a great challenge this is shaping up to be!

sc_fossil September 13 2007, 20:50:55 UTC

Thank you, Sheila. I owe you a lot for helping me in Pros and being supportive. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story.

angel_ci5 September 13 2007, 20:17:08 UTC

What a brilliant concept - a really intriguing and clever story. Love the way it all becomes clear and we realise why Doyle hadn't wanted to figure out what was wrong. Wonderful, thank you!

sc_fossil September 13 2007, 20:56:49 UTC

Thank you for having the patience reading this. I knew it was a bit different, but really makes me feel good to know that you enjoyed the story.

asymphototropic September 14 2007, 03:30:55 UTC

Extraordinary combination of almost-science fiction elements and mystery, disturbing and compelling. A very gripping story. I was quite relieved to discover eventually that it was describing a case of post-surgical delirium. Always good to have a definitive diagnosis, eh? A couple of times after you'd returned Doyle to reality, you had me worried he'd relapse to the weird place again.

Whew. [feel a bit wrung-out, but pleased to have arrived at the reward of a pleasant conclusion]

sc_fossil September 14 2007, 04:44:09 UTC

I'm so happy you arrived safely at the final destination and I hope you are completely recovered from your journey. +g+

Thanks so much for your much appreciated comments and for taking time to read my contribution.

metabolick September 14 2007, 05:01:55 UTC

When Ray kept feeling pain in his chest I figured it had something to do with the shooting, but I sure didn't realize that he was in a dream world while it was happening. Very clever! A lovely read - thank you.

sc_fossil September 14 2007, 13:09:51 UTC

And thank you for your kind comments. I'm glad it kept you interested and you enjoyed it.