I am really really aware that I said hey, let's all post lots of Pros, and then I didn't... *headdesk* It's not that I've not been doing Pros - I even managed a wee something during my weekly writing group last week, and finally finished it off... *g*
Every Day is Autumn
by Slantedlight
There was nothing, Doyle thought, that would make the world
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[T]hen there was a jostling beside him, against him, and Bodie was there, the full force of him, an elbow in his ribs, rubbing his hands together, that irrepressible look of a job-well-done loud on his face.
“Pack it in, Bodie,” Doyle growled, because he just couldn’t take it tonight. “I’m not in the mood.”
He could almost hear Bodie changing course.
“Yeah, well,” Bodie said, squinting out into the night and the rain. “Don’t blame you. She had us all fooled.”
I love this bit. I can really see Bodie as you describe him. And both his initial attempt to impart his own mood to Ray and his slightly labored switch to engaging with Ray's mood seem very in character.
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Just how I was hoping it would feel - thank you so much for that! *g*
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You've certainly made up for your time away. *g*
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