Fallout (part 1) by cornishcat

[cornishcat]

The lads’ inability to talk to each other on a personal level has disastrous consequences.Ray was disorientated when he first woke up. The room was unfamiliar and he tried to recall who he had left the stag party with. He lay quietly for a few minutes, listening to her soft snores, then realised he wasn’t really interested in finding the answer.

Comments

[gilda_elise]

The lads’ inability to talk to each other on a personal level has disastrous consequences.

Oooh, that sounds ominous! But I've saved the story as a RTF and will hopefully get to it now that I'm feeling halfway human. *g* I'll let you know. :-)

[cornishcat]

Don't be afraid - I love our lads and wouldn't do them any permanent damage.

I'll look forward to your opinion of this, my first long story. :D

[trepkos]

Wow! Gripping read!

[cornishcat]

I'm so glad the story gripped you - it's a worry knowing if you've pitched it suitably. Thanks for your opinion.

[trepkos]

Will the second part be posted on your journal?

[cornishcat]

Hi.
I posted all three parts to discoveredinalj and have also added the complete story to AO3 but, I'm sorry, I just don't know how to do 'links'.
(There are illustrations to accompany the fic but I don't know how to include those either!)
If you can't find all the parts then please let me know and I'll send them to you. :D

[byslantedlight]

Fab - a nice long story for the last day of the challenge! I'm looking forward to reading this... *g*

[cornishcat]

Hope you enjoy it. This is the first long fic I've ever written.

[ali15son]

sorry i am a few days late in responding but......oh yes, perect in every way and just my kind of story.

thankyou so much for the hurt , the comfort, the angst and everything inbetween.

[cornishcat]

So glad you enjoyed the read and that it was 'perfect'. I enjoyed the write and may just do it again! :D

[ali15son]

anytime you feel the need to hurt Bodie ...then i'm for all it *g*