Where All This Started by HambelandJemima and Slantedlight - Part Two

[byslantedlight]

Where All This Started
by HambelandJemima and Slantedlight
Part Two ( Part One here)

Comments

[siskiou]

Loved it! One surprise after another! It was great to see some of Bodie's relatives and Marge's appearance at the end was the cherry on top. But now I really want to read part 3, when Bodie and Doyle go home. :)

[byslantedlight]

Oh good, I'm glad you liked it! *g* Part two was supposed to be longer I have to say, so maybe there's room for a sort of coda one day... *g*

[siskiou]

Oh, yes please, to a coda! :)

[hambelandjemima]

Thank you :)

[merentha13]

A fun read! And Marge was a welcome surprise. I enjoyed this! Thank you both. :-)

[byslantedlight]

Oh good - it was fun to co-write as well! *g* Thank you!

[hambelandjemima]

Glad you liked it! Thank you :)

[cim3745]

Great idea - Jenna with Bodie's behaviour and a puzzled Doyle.
The dialogue of the first meet of them - brilliant *g*
Thank you for a really nice reading.

[byslantedlight]

I'm glad you liked it - thank you for a lovely comment! *g*

[hambelandjemima]

They were fun to write, and I enjoyed co-writing with Slantedlight :)

[sw33n3y]

Oh what a great caper...especially with Marge thrown into the mix! Well done! :D

[hambelandjemima]

When Slantedlight suggested Marge should help out, I was all for it! Thank you :)

[golden_bastet]

What a treasure of a story!

A case story with H/C; a less... restrained, shall we say, version of Bodie - LOL; Capris; things obvious to all but the lads; and Marge! Plus the promise of a future. Absolutely awesome.

Thanks for posting, collaborating - and letting us have a peek. :D

Will you post it to AO3?

[byslantedlight]

What a lovely comment - thank you! *g* Co-writing with Hambel was brilliant fun, so I'm so glad it's worked out from the reading side too!

We will be posting to A03 and Pros Lib, we just want to give it a bit of a final polish, because it was a bit rushed on the night!