Where All This Started by HambelandJemima and Slantedlight - Part Two

[byslantedlight]

Where All This Started
by HambelandJemima and Slantedlight
Part Two ( Part One here)

Comments

[krisserci5]

This was great!!! Thankyou :)

[byslantedlight]

Thank you!

[hambelandjemima]

Thanks. We had fun writing it :)

[jat_sapphire]

Hey, what fun! I loved Jenna. Thank you for posting this! The hurt/not-yet-comfort part felt very real, and the hint of the future was perfect for January.

[byslantedlight]

Oh good - I'm glad you liked it! Here's to the future!

[hambelandjemima]

Thank you! We loved exploring Jenna's character :)

[tango65]

Happy sigh. Just wonderful. Thank you.

[byslantedlight]

I'm so pleased you liked it! *vbg*

[hambelandjemima]

Glad you enjoyed it :)

[cornishcat]

Really enjoyed this story. Thanks for the treat.

[byslantedlight]

Oh good, I'm glad - you're welcome!

[hambelandjemima]

Thank you. Glad you liked it :)

[heliophile_oxon]

Oh, brilliant! Vivid and beautifully done - Jenna is outstanding, I'd love to see more of her some day (and Doyle's preconceptions are perfectly rendered), and what a delight it is that they end up at Delores and Alf's - and Marge is there! (quietly putting away what she was there to deal with, I presume *g*, before taking charge and dealing with Doyle) :-)))))

Absolutely cracking, I love it to bits. Thank you so much, you wonderful writers!

[byslantedlight]

So very glad that you liked it - hurrah! *g*

[hambelandjemima]

We loved exploring Jenna's character. When Slanted Light suggested bringing Marge in to the story, I was all, "Yes, yes, yes!" *g*

Thank you.