Comments | discoveredinalj: Pros fic: Betwixt and Between by JoJo - Pros Bingo Challenge 2016

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Jul 31, 2016 21:17

( Betwixt and Between )

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Comments 23

cloudless_9193 July 31 2016, 21:15:34 UTC

“Mate,” Doyle said. It was the only part he could get out. :-)

solosundance August 2 2016, 13:46:55 UTC

:-))

trepkos July 31 2016, 21:39:34 UTC

*gulp*

solosundance October 3 2016, 16:51:14 UTC

Luckily it all worked out in the end :)

(and sorry for late response!)

sc_fossil August 1 2016, 00:06:47 UTC

Ahh, poor Doyle! Here's hoping he gets to say it!

solosundance October 3 2016, 16:51:33 UTC

He did \o/

ali15son August 1 2016, 06:36:13 UTC

loving it , thankyou so much .

solosundance October 3 2016, 16:51:55 UTC

thank you!

(and sorry for late response!)

sw33n3y August 1 2016, 07:00:48 UTC

I loved the (for want of a better term) beautiful awkwardness that makes their relationship believable, in this part. Doyle watching Bodie teetering on the edge, about to take all that might have been with him, is a potent mix of warmth and sadness.

solosundance October 3 2016, 16:52:55 UTC

I can't think of a better term than beautiful awkwardness - perfect for them!