Oh, this is great! Both Bodie and Doyle are so in-character! Love all the scenes with Bodie and the kids!*g* And all the Bodie/Doyle interaction... Bodie, waking up in the morning and trying to figure out whom he'd brought home the night before- hilarious! Doyle's reaction to that. Doyle, being all predator-like with Bodie and kind-hearted with the kids. Just lovely... Thank you!
Catching up a bit here! It's nice to have such a light-hearted entry, and I liked it that the thing keeping them apart, the thing they had to get through before they could allow themselves the luxury of being together...was a kids' party. It's just so...incongruous, and fun for that. :-) You do a very nice line in drunk Bodies, too. Thank you!
This was a blast. Loved the lads in their pirate gear and loved seeing what a few unruly kids do to Bodie's cool (or lack thereof). Great, great stuff. Thank you!
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