Discovered in a Christmas Pud - December 9th

Dec 09, 2013 16:01

Far off in the distance Doyle thought he could hear singing. And bells.

Singing and bells.

It had to be the drugs.

Still, it also had to be an improvement on the disembodied voices which had been plaguing him for some time. He turned slightly, bringing his hips with him. Something pulled at his side, like teeth. Sharp, vicious teeth, a whole ( Read more... )

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dawnebeth December 9 2013, 17:06:08 UTC
Love this so very much. Poor Doyle, all groggy and hurting, trying to get out what he wants to say. Bodie right there, even when not expected, to comfort.

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solosundance December 10 2013, 20:24:36 UTC
I have a weakness for making my boys loopy on drugs - glad you liked it, thank you!

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ali15son December 9 2013, 17:42:30 UTC
What a wonderful story but my tears are starting to gather again , I thought I was all cried out but they are beginning to creep back again, just the thought of bodie being there for Doyle aw bless em!

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solosundance December 10 2013, 20:26:19 UTC
I was more than a little teary writing it tbh, but I feel better now :)

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sc_fossil December 9 2013, 17:46:37 UTC
I like the unworldliness of this, Doyle's not sure what's up and what's down, and Bodie's voice and hand anchor him. He thinks. :) Well done. Thanks!

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solosundance December 10 2013, 20:27:17 UTC
I was going for unworldliness, and the idea that all might not be what it seems, so yay! And thank you :)

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sc_fossil December 10 2013, 20:43:43 UTC
You know I meant otherworldliness but you understood my old brain. :)

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solosundance December 10 2013, 21:08:14 UTC
*pets Kat's lovely brain*

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snailbones December 9 2013, 18:52:56 UTC


What a gorgeous, perfect little fic, thank you!

I especially loved, 'Happy, merry, bastard Christmas. - that cracked me up, it was so Doyle. You always get their voices just right.

Thank you again.

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solosundance December 10 2013, 20:27:58 UTC
Aw, thank you snaily ♥

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cloudless_9193 December 9 2013, 19:48:50 UTC
It's beautiful! Doyle flying and Bodie, the Voice, grounding him. So much said without saying anything. :-)

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solosundance December 10 2013, 20:57:19 UTC
Thank you - I like the idea of Bodie as the Voice :)

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