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byslantedlight December 14 2012, 08:45:07 UTC
“Ran out of bread crumbs. Besides” a pause whilst he took a careful breath, “what else but a Capri would save the day?”
Heee - great last line - ran out of breadcrumbs... *vbg* Very Doyle! And I love the idea of him sending the tiny plastic car under the door so that Bodie could rescue him! *g*

Thank you!

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tango65 December 14 2012, 09:15:23 UTC
Thank you! I think the story started with that thought and worked back from there. Glad you enjoyed it. :)

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moth2fic December 14 2012, 09:34:47 UTC
Alovely last line! And the whole concept of the tiny car leading to Doyle is intriguing and sweet. Thanks for a good read over breakfast!!

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tango65 December 14 2012, 09:42:04 UTC
You're welcome, over dinner!

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liriel1810 December 14 2012, 10:20:40 UTC
Very clever of Doyle to use the car to let Bodie know where he was, and of course he knew Bodie was looking for him.

All is right with the world with our lads wrapped in each others arms again.

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tango65 December 14 2012, 11:22:17 UTC
Absolutely. Thanks for the comment.

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tango65 December 14 2012, 11:22:44 UTC
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

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victoryatnight December 14 2012, 12:07:14 UTC

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tango65 December 14 2012, 19:47:39 UTC
You're most welcome. :)

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