Heart

Mar 11, 2012 19:31

Shots exploded and Rahad's fleeing car clipped Bodie. He fell, momentarily stunned and winded. Heard Doyle's panicked shout.

Here was Doyle, rolling him onto his back, seeking his heart.

He wrapped his arms around Doyle, pulling him down into a desperate embrace. "Never knew you cared ( Read more... )

drabblesmarch2012, thehag

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margaret_r March 12 2012, 00:10:21 UTC
That's so sad, it makes you hope they find each other. Beautifully written:)

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hagsrus March 12 2012, 15:23:20 UTC
Thank you!

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sc_fossil March 12 2012, 01:35:16 UTC
I like how you gave us a little bit of what Doyle had really wanted to do when he found Bodie alive. Nice job here!

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hagsrus March 12 2012, 15:24:10 UTC
Thank you!

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lillianorchid March 12 2012, 03:11:02 UTC
Ah, exactly what Doyle really wanted to do in Untouchables. :) Love it!

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hagsrus March 12 2012, 15:24:22 UTC
Thank you!

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lillianorchid March 12 2012, 20:35:13 UTC
You're Welcome! :D

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byslantedlight March 12 2012, 07:40:15 UTC
Ah - very nice! Thank you!

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hagsrus March 12 2012, 15:24:37 UTC
Thank you!

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solosundance March 12 2012, 07:47:25 UTC
Oh, boys.


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hagsrus March 12 2012, 15:24:51 UTC
Thank you!

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