Two Day Drabble Challenge: Snatch Back

[hambelandjemima]

Doyle raced along in the Capri, intent on only one thing.

Someone had taken Bodie and Ray Doyle was taking him back.

The radio crackled into life. "Alpha to 4.5."

He snatched up the mike. "4.5."

"Report to base. Immediately"Sir, I'm in pursuit

Comments

[potztausend]

I don't know how to write a heart, but I like the story too ;-).

[lillianorchid]

That's exactly what our Doyle would do! No one takes Bodie from him! :D Well done!

[kiwisue]

Ooh, the tension! Right, I want the rest of the story that goes with this *g*

[etain_antrim]

Yeah for Doyle on a mission! Bodie will be back home in no time. Love the drive and urgency of this drabble.

[merentha13]

Go, Doyle, go! Perfect capturing of the actions and feelings in just a few words. Well done!