Discovered in the Christmas Tree--day 14: Ray's Snowflakes

[hutchynstarsk]

Comments

[snailbones]

I love how you've said so much in such a short piece, and what a lovely image of Doyle snipping away in bored moments. Really enjoyed it, thank you so much.

[hutchynstarsk]

Thank you so much!! :D I'm glad you enjoyed it!! :-)

[dawnebeth]

Just lovely and heartbreaking! I can see Doyle making the snowflakes.

[hutchynstarsk]

Aww, thank you so much!! :D I'm glad you could see that. :)

[milomaus]

Lovely little story, so much told in so few words!
Thanks for sharing!

[hutchynstarsk]

Thank you so much!! :D :D

[nickygabriel]

Bodie always leans closer to watch, can’t help himself. Doyle’s artistic side still surprises him after all this time.

Aww, this is so true. And this scene is beautiful!

But when Doyle disappears, each snowflake becomes a little stab to the heart, a reminder of what they’ve lost, what he’s lost.

That hurt! And how it must have hurt Bodie?

Then he jumps up and leaves them forgotten in the waiting room as soon as he’s allowed to go in and see Ray.

They are so alike! They know what is the most important. That was a truly beautiful story. Thank you!

[hutchynstarsk]

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Thank you so much for your beautiful & detailed feedback! I'm so pleased you liked this story, I can't even say. :)

[rosie55]

Lovely little snippet - so much told in so few words and you capture the lads so well. Thank you for your offerings today, lovely!

[hutchynstarsk]

Thanks so much!! :D I'm really glad you think I captured them well! :D Thank you!