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Sep 21, 2011 15:22

He drifted up from the depths of sleep, content to lie curled in warm safety.  The light was softened by the spring-green foliage of the tree outside the window, casting ever-moving shadows on the pale walls.  A light breeze brought scents of the climbing rose outside the window, and the rustle and chirp of busy small birds was peaceful.  Eyes ( Read more... )

murphybabe, whenyouseethis

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Sweet Dreams heliophile_oxon September 21 2011, 15:51:07 UTC
Excellently done! And also eep, I hope Doyle's about to rescue him very very soon!

Reminds me of the ending of Terry Gilliam's Brazil ... ow. Strong stuff.

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Re: Sweet Dreams murphybabe September 21 2011, 18:44:18 UTC
I haven't come across Brazil, so I will have to track that down. Glad it gave you an eep. And of course Doyle is on the way!

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Re: Sweet Dreams heliophile_oxon September 21 2011, 18:55:28 UTC
It's a great film - black comedy, with aspects that are very funny and aspects that are very, very black.

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Re: Sweet Dreams murphybabe September 21 2011, 18:49:22 UTC
I've just realised - it was your request that prompted this one. The 'getting high' bit stuck, but sadly, not the accompanying lust! Must see what I can do about that...

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snailbones September 21 2011, 15:52:47 UTC


I love it - it's deliciously ambiguous in the best possible way. Thank you!

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murphybabe September 21 2011, 18:44:37 UTC
Hee - thank you!

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byslantedlight September 21 2011, 16:52:02 UTC
Oooh, very nice, gorgeously... um... *g*

And definitely slash - surely that's Doyle's embrace, that is?! *g*

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murphybabe September 21 2011, 18:46:01 UTC
*g* - yes, silly me - of course it's slash! Ta for the comment :-)

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shooting2kill September 21 2011, 16:56:36 UTC
Very intriguing...

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murphybabe September 21 2011, 18:46:36 UTC
Thank you - there might be more soon!

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sc_fossil September 21 2011, 19:06:52 UTC
Oh, ouch. That was mean of you to give me such sweetness and then smack me in the face! LOL! You got me good. I was sucked right in. Nice job with only a few words here. Thanks!

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murphybabe September 22 2011, 19:07:56 UTC
Yes, but good mean, I hope? Thanks for commenting!

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