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Discovered in the Fairylights - Fic: A Season of Misunderstandings

Jan 04, 2011 11:58

Squeaking in just under the wire...

( A Season of Misunderstandings )

Comments 15

liriel1810 January 4 2011, 00:51:26 UTC

Can I smack Bodie, just a bit? It would have been so much easier if he'd explained things to Doyle! Silly buggers. I'm glad Doyle discovered what was really going on, but Bodie still needs a smacking. *g*

Thanks for sharing!

firlefanzine January 4 2011, 01:58:00 UTC

"Can I smack Bodie, just a bit?"
No! Of course not! The poor Bodie... :-)
It's all Doyle's fault!

liriel1810 January 5 2011, 06:19:25 UTC

*g* I think they're equally to blame, Doyle for jumping to conclusions, and Bodie for not explaining. ;)

sc_fossil January 4 2011, 01:50:38 UTC

Geez, Doyle, act like a teenage girl! LOL! You did a great job showing how not talking can make somebody believe the worst about their best friend. I understand how Bodie didn't defend himself because Doyle was too sure about his suspicions to listen. Thank heavens Doyle knows he's been wrong and Bodie's willing to forgive. Thanks, E!

firlefanzine January 4 2011, 02:01:22 UTC

I love your last sentence: "...and he smiles when Doyle takes his hand."
All misunderstandings gone! :-)

Thanks!

gilda_elise January 4 2011, 02:06:16 UTC

Oh, man, don't scare me that way! Yes, Doyle misunderstood, but Bodie could have explained!

Did I say very well done? I loved it!

milomaus January 4 2011, 05:28:20 UTC

Scary, but very lovely ending!
Breaking up without talking and getting back together the same way. That´s it. Men...

It COULD´ve been so much easier. But then there would be nothing for us to read.

Thanks for sharing, lovely way to start my day!