And this: In the rooms and corridors that make up my organisation there are two names that are never spoken out loud. I ensure that they're never forgotten. made me shiver.
I really, really enjoyed your story, though it was quite distracting to F5 lj every now and then. What a fun idea, and amazing that you told such a long story with a minimum of words!
...it was quite distracting to F5 lj every now and then. I was surprised at how often I had to post with the number of chapters I had, and the day seemed to fly by. Maybe not for you though *eg*
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for sticking with it. :)
I'm one of those souls who need some sort of header (in this instance, trailer), so I've read it all in one go.
Wow. Brief, and yet, there's so much story there. Brilliant, concise portrayal of life on the run and an operation susie that really did leave them out in the cold permanently.
Nice to see Ruth heading up CI5 too. I always thought she was a real smart cookie.
I felt I had to put the trailer only in the last post as it would spoil those who don't want warnings if they read it along the way. Thank you for waiting patiently :)
I like Ruth. She doesn't take any nonsense from anyone.
Terrific idea and story! Each chapter set its own mood. Loved that Ray was the nervous, on edge partner while Bodie remained cool and calm (on the outside). I really enjoyed this. (and I did figure out that you'd gone off to your own bed after posting the first rounds - very evil that(!), so I didn't miss out on too much sleep last night! *g*)
Loved that Ray was the nervous, on edge partner while Bodie remained cool and calm (on the outside). I felt that although Ray is very good at undercover work, Bodie would be better at living a different life for real because of the way he's lived in canon.
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And this: In the rooms and corridors that make up my organisation there are two names that are never spoken out loud. I ensure that they're never forgotten.
made me shiver.
I really, really enjoyed your story, though it was quite distracting to F5 lj every now and then. What a fun idea, and amazing that you told such a long story with a minimum of words!
Thanks so much for sharing!
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I was surprised at how often I had to post with the number of chapters I had, and the day seemed to fly by. Maybe not for you though *eg*
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for sticking with it. :)
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Thanks
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Wow. Brief, and yet, there's so much story there. Brilliant, concise portrayal of life on the run and an operation susie that really did leave them out in the cold permanently.
Nice to see Ruth heading up CI5 too. I always thought she was a real smart cookie.
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I like Ruth. She doesn't take any nonsense from anyone.
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I felt that although Ray is very good at undercover work, Bodie would be better at living a different life for real because of the way he's lived in canon.
Ah... you sussed me out *g*
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