Prosfic - Snow and Falling

[byslantedlight]

I didn't think I was going to manage this one after all, but I did - hurrah! Just a wee, random moment that might have taken place in the snow...

Comments

[solosundance]

GORGEOUS. That's all I have to say :)

[byslantedlight]

Aw - thank you! *g* The lads are, aren't they... *vbg*

[cornishcat]

Just beautiful! I love how you have weaved the emotion and symbolicalness (is that really a word?) of the potential fall into Doyle's thoughts..... and I just hope that they make that jump together - soon. *g*

[byslantedlight]

Heee - symbolism, maybe? *g* I like symbolicalness though - it sort of drips off the tongue... *vbg* And yes! I reckon they're getting very close to a jump, personally... *g* And thank you - very much! This made me smile! *g*

[callistosh65]

You set the scene beautifully and their quiet banter is utterly perfect. "Busy?" Bodie stomped over, looked down at him, and Doyle closed his eyes again.
"Oh, you know..."
::contented sigh:: Yup, them's the lads. Thank you for this wintry ytreat!

[byslantedlight]

Ah, thank you - and you're welcome! *g*

[snailbones]

Beautiful. And perfect. And did I mention, beautiful? Wow!

[byslantedlight]

Hee - thank you! *g*

[byslantedlight]

Well thank you, that's a lovely thing to say! *g*