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foreverfoxcat in discoveredinalj

Bank holiday challenge fic

Sep 29, 2009 16:24

Hope you like it.

( Not on holiday )

Comments 43

callistosh65 September 29 2009, 15:39:43 UTC

Very nice. I loved the atmosphere here, I could really see Torbay stretched out in front of them. And that moment of miniature hand-holding was exquisite. Just little fingers, but so, so them.

Thank you, that was gorgeous. You'll have to go on Pros writing holidays more often..*g*

foreverfoxcat September 29 2009, 20:13:20 UTC

Thank you very much, I'm really glad you liked it. This holiday I'm on has certainly been the most relaxing holiday I've ever had, it's fantastic. And I couldn't resist the idea of bringing the lads to my home town, I'm glad you enjoyed the trip. :D

gilda_elise September 29 2009, 15:41:33 UTC

I love the scene at the end, making do with what they can have and making it mean so much. Really lovely.

foreverfoxcat September 29 2009, 20:15:02 UTC

Thank you, that's really nice of you to say. I'm glad you liked it. I definitely had that end scene in my head when I was writing it, I'm glad it worked for you.

lukadreaming September 29 2009, 16:30:24 UTC

Love this! I can totally picture them in Torbay from this. And linking their little fingers is gorgeous.

foreverfoxcat September 29 2009, 20:17:27 UTC

Thank you! I couldn't resist the gratuitous hand holding at the end. :D

solosundance September 29 2009, 16:33:46 UTC

I am officially in love with this. The Doyle pov is delightful - his idea of what a holiday should be is ace ... If they had been on holiday then they would have been able to put up deckchairs side by side on the beach, waste all their money on the penny arcade, eat ice cream until they were sick… - excellent! And kind of melancholy. And I'm a sucker for pinkie love, and the gentle conversation and the colours and smells of Torbay. And hahahaha for Bodie's favourite ice-cream. So, all in all, I am officially in love with this. *g*

foreverfoxcat September 29 2009, 20:19:08 UTC

Oh my goodness, that's absolutely the loveliest, nicest, kindest comment I've ever had! Thank you so much. I'm ever so glad you liked it, and thanks so much for the comment. I'll send you over a case of gin as a thank you. :D

andreathelion September 29 2009, 18:52:40 UTC

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, made me actually feel like I was there, too. And that sort of hand holding, just a perfect ending. Thank you!!

foreverfoxcat September 29 2009, 20:20:40 UTC

Thank you very much, I'm really pleased you liked it and that you enjoyed the trip to Torbay with the lads. Help yourself to ice cream on the pier. :D