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[fiendery]

Track: 7. Linear Clocks and Daughters
Notes: I hate formatting spacing. I originally said, "Fuck it," and was going to take a picture of how this looks in writing, but I decided I should actually put some sort of effort into putting it into type. So now I hate formatting spacing even more

Comments

[sinistera]

I will respond to your poem in a bit but first--
seriously, the tags!? aksjdfoasidjfaosdif Ahhh--- I guess, I shall add in everyone's tags first. Thank you for the heads up! I will retag this entry but .. um, unless you are planning on posting before tomorrow, you should be able to tag.

[fiendery]

I don't have e-mail notifications on, so I completely did not get this. But in any case, I guess it's not an issue anymore...

[hemera_oneiroi]

i... can't make any meaningful comment except, erm, wow.

[fiendery]

Haha, just as long as it's not a bad wow, I suppose.

[hemera_oneiroi]

ah, it is a good wow!

i just really suck at commenting or critque for poetry -- i barely scrapped through that part in literature in school. ^^;;; but something about the cadence and the words you used... really resonated?

[sinistera]

I get a sense of loss, and compromise. Unsettling compromise.