[EXO] i want to make you move (because you're standing still)

[feixing]

i want to make you move (because you're standing still) | EXO | joonmyun/sehun | nc-17 | 5500~ | warnings: significant(ish) age difference, d/s themes, roleplay, barebacking, sex under the influence of alcohol, dirty talk, person position of authority (teacher/student)there lies a thin line between physical affection and affection. Often, the line

Comments

[1beinghated]

jfc. wow. so much porn and so much feelings.

this is nice. the ending kind of hurts me though HAHAHAHA nooooo but seriously, you write so well it kind of makes me depressed T__T

author-nim, I wish you all the best this new year, and that you continue to write as wonderfully as you do right (which you will, no doubt). HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!

[feixing]

ironically, i wished i had wrote more porn! but i got deathly lazy and i didn't want like, 15k of porn shudders.

and i am glad you thought it was nice! i am sorry about the ending, but i thought it was slightly more realistic that way? not everyone falls in love with each other, i suppose.

and ;~; you're a sweetheart! i wish you a great year ahead too, and have a happy new year! ♡

tysm for reading!

[xfragments]

omg seho feels all over the place. and this reminds me of ezra and aria's relationship in pretty little liars (if you watch) so i loved it even more.

[bicurious_chen]

I dont know what to say. ;;
it was good though, very good. this is the way i like my suhun fics, well except for the unclear ending lol.

[kickchu]

It was all nice until the end. Great fic anyways, love it.

[ext_740541]

This is so beautifully written, so tentative, so careful, but with a headlong rush of impulsiveness that can only be described as "young". I loved the dynamics between Joonmyun and Sehun, loved that switch in roles. I'm surprised Joonmyun has less morals, self control and maybe self preservation, if this relationship were to be discovered. But maybe they both get a kick from how er- forbidden? the relationship is.

All things considered, I found it a lovely, realistic capture of what would've happened if the two had met under different circumstances. It's beautiful. Thanks for writing and sharing!! Take care xoxo :)