[EXO] carcasses of stars in your eyes

[feixing]

carcasses of stars in your eyes | exo | jongin/lu han | pg-13 | 6300~ 
lu han has empty eyes but jongin thinks they are the prettiest ones he has ever seen

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[seulpeo]

GREEN LIGHT GREEN LIGHT LUKAI YAY

[feixing]

kisses your nose and sends you all my love than you again :CCCC
and yay green light now I shall red light your enthusiasm because WHY I love you.

[seulpeo]

how dare you red light me, this fic is gorgeous stop :C
i love you more YOU WROTE LUKAI!!

[leadernim]

TAP DANCES HERE

[feixing]

tap dancing is cool I approve wholly. ♥

[emo_what97]

I just.... :< sobs Rach you write the best thing and the way you describe Jongin's inner conflict about how he feels about Lu Han is <3 I just loved how you played on this concept and didn't go the cliche route of making Lu Han miraculously have feelings, etc and left it open cause I felt like it was appropriate? The fine line for detail you had was good too and I'm going to re-read this again to let it sink in ;;

/shoves all my love at you

[feixing]

you are too nice omg ♥ no sobbing holds you and yes that was the path i was consciously avoiding so i am glad it worked well for you! ;~~~; and what detail waylt WHY WOULD YOU RE-READ THIS

i love you always ♥

[nisakomi]

rachael.

this is beautiful, absolutely gorgeous

the premise is phenomenally moving and i loved the way you executed it as well - the writing, the pacing, the characterizations were spot on. it was an incredibly moving piece and i absolutely adore how it developed, how we got to see more and more of lu han and jongin in such a heart wrenching way. poignant and perfect ♥

[feixing]

june.

;~~~; beautiful ah, thank you. ♥♥
i am glad everything was spot on for you! i was a little worried about the pacing so i am glad it worked out!
and perfect ahhhh you flater. tysm ♥♥♥

[starrymoons]

omg rachaelllllllllllll this was so good
it was just really interesting (and sad) to see how delusional jongin was and how he fell so hard even though he knew luhan could never feel the same way
i liked luhan's solid character and how rigid he was, not changing just the way he was supposed to.
this was excellent lukai angst in a different dynamic that fit very well and you wrote beautifully ;w;

[feixing]

hyewonnnnnnnn ♥
;~~; poor jongin aaahhh i felt bad but ♥
and i am glad you liked lu han here! i was slightly worried about writing him this way.

;~; sobs thank you!!!! ♥