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[disco_adventure]

I’d like to wake up in a sudden Manhattan of pure convenience

Silently stroll past the bank towers of commercial insanity

And watch the limousines of dreams race with the taxi cabs of opinion and reality

My bags silently reside in the limo’s safe harbor

Chauffeur’s cool eyes illuminate a supernatural glow of expectation

My beloved Jockey of

Comments

[ireallyhatepeas]

The beginning reminds me of The Beatles song "You never give me your money".

"One sweet dream,
pick up the bags and get in the limousine,
Soon we'll be away from here..."

Great song, great poem.

[disco_adventure]

it should remind you of it. It was your away message dear that inspired this!