How's My Driving?

[coniurati]

✘ HOW'S MY RPING?

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[beyondimagining]

Danny Fenton | Danny Phantom | invisibill
Takato Matsuda | Digimon Tamers | gallantgoggles
Will Stanton | Dark is Rising Sequence | beyondimagining

Any crit welcomed. Right now I'm most worried about Will's voice. Am I hitting the right balance between the Old One and the boy? I'd also like to know what people think about Danny's christmas plot this month.

[eroslegy]

Oh Danny, Denmark will force you to enjoy the Magic of Christmas, even if he has to tie you to a chair and get you drunk on Christmas beer (A REAL THING IN DENMARK) to do it! But more relevantly, maybe it's just my childhood speaking, but I always enjoy Will and from what I can remember of the books you do a great job with him. He's supposed to sound way older than he is, and does, so… yay? XD;

[gallantgoggles]

Sadly, I'm probably going to have to backtag any further Christmas shenanigans. Family decided at the last minute we're going to leave tomorrow for Christmas. And we're having it in a place with no wifi. But I will be making at least one backtag post for the Christmas event. I can't miss the opportunity to give Danny the Scrooge even more reasons to hate Christmas.

That's a relief! I'm planning on starting a canon review over Christmas, but its good to know I'm not too far off. Especially with his chip event about to finish up.

[brotundbier]

Germany ; brotundbier ; Hetalia
Greece ; gocoldturkey ; Hetalia
Afuganis-tan ; terrorizedafu ; Afuganis-tan
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Germany is fine, but Greece and Afu are having a shitton of issues and i dont even know why. I think im suffering the blues or something

OH AND. Last HMD it was mentioned that my ((action/thoughts)) were a little hard to read. I asked around, most said 'i got used to it'. Does anybody else have this problem perhaps? I'd be willing to change if it were a significant number, but at the same time... well. yea. have at thee

[eroslegy]

I would really like to see Germany around more, for selfish reasons and non-selfish ones: I think you have a very good Germany, both silly and serious and organized, and would just like him to have more of a presence in Discedo!

As for the ((thing)), I… personally don't find it hard to read or distracting, although I guess it could be if it was a tag with normal parenthesis as well? Like if you were writing out something like this (or something). ((But IDK))

Which is a long way of saying, no problems here!

[brotundbier]

UUggghhh IM SLOWLY WORKING ON THAT Ive got that complex where im like 'Uff germany's lame to tag because he's got a stick up his ass most of the time and doesnt want to have fun, be nice, OR make friends' which i love, but sometimes.... YEA ILL WORK ON IT

LOL yea i don't use (these) with the ((these)) because that would obviously create a worm hole inside the tag itself. ILL JUST KEEP WAITING AND SEEING

[kanisi_kokoro]

L-lol, I've never even really noticed about the ((...)) thing. I've just kind of gotten used to it. XD

If it's the way you do things though, I don't see a problem. There's no universal way to write those things.

[thiefcat]

Nami | One Piece | thiefcat
Ema Skye | Ace Attorney | munchalot

Activity hasn't been as good as I had hoped! I got sick right after I came off hiatus. I'm still a little shaky with Ema from canon reviewing for her, I'm trying to find a good happy medium with her and I haven't entirely gotten in the swing of it yet. Crit on either of them would be greatly appreciated~

[eroslegy]

I don't know either canons, but I really enjoy both your characters! And harassing them, yeahhhhhhh! I wish I had something constructive to say, but alas, I do not. ;;

[thiefcat]

Thank you! :D Even if you don't know the canons, it's still something that's nice to hear~ I'm very much enjoying the harassment as well! :D I don't really think we had gotten to play together much until the last month and it's been a lot of fun! :Db

[pikachuu]

Rika Furude → "Frederica Bernkastel" (princessofmoe) ◆ Higurashi no Naku Koro ni (Kai) / When They Cry 2 (Answer)
Jilleena Lacot (ys_must_die) ◆ Meteor Methuselah (Immortal Rain)
Sakutaro (cantsaygao) ◆ Umineko no Naku Koro ni (Chiru) / When They Cry 4 (Breakdown)

Um. I just finished finals a few days back. I'm trying to backtag threads... and yeah... I really can't think of anything else to say...

[eroslegy]

I've never really interacted with Jilleena, but I think Rika and Sakutaro are both totally adorable. You're usually really active and busy and tag around and great things like that, so it's always awesome to see you around the game!

[princessofmoe]

Haha, I have trouble throwing Jilleena out there since she's not a moe kawaii uguu~ character like my other two. ;A; I feel like I've been made of fail lately, but thank you~.

[satellitemecha]

Yusei Fudo | Yu-Gi-Oh! 5Ds | satellitemecha

I've been here about two weeks now, and I think (read as=hope) that I'm doing a good job.
Although I feel I may be making Yusei a little too oblivious >_>

And I have no idea how to make HMD a link as shown by others above, so just click the journal 'cause I'm lazy and fail like that >_>

[eroslegy]

I don't know the character or canon, but so far he seems good to me! The only thing I can suggest is making your posts more accessible to other people-your last one, for example, was addressed only to scientists/canon mates, making it harder to reply to for anyone else.

The other thing is, um, in Denmark's thread with him here, the part in brackets wasn't actually spoken aloud? I use those kind of brackets to indicate thoughts or actions or extra, haha.

Oh-to direct link, you do it like so: <*a href="URL"*>words<*/a*>, only without the ***.

[satellitemecha]

Yea, I know, that last one was pretty bad. >_< But I couldn't think of a better way to go about it...
I'll try a bit harder in the future. ^_^

Oops! My bad. ^_^!

And thanks.

[eroslegy]

It takes some practice, weirdly enough? You're definitely doing fine overall! :)