[Poetry Month] The Surface of the Water by Jason Schneiderman

Apr 05, 2011 11:05

The Surface of the Water by Jason Schneiderman

has properties, tension, behaves differently
from the rest of the water. If you fell

onto it from a height, you would bounce.
The surface would reject you, say

I'm a solid too -- we can't both be here,but then the rest of the water would accept you ( Read more... )

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airgiodslv April 10 2011, 21:12:42 UTC
Oh wow, I really like that one. It's simple but contains such a powerful idea.

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disarm_d April 12 2011, 14:32:09 UTC
Exactly! I feel the same, :)

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