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shyunpo in dirtymangoes

LUCY/SUSAN - KILL ME SOFTLY

Jul 10, 2008 01:30

Title: Kill Me Softly
Fandom/Pairing: NARNIA; Lucy Pevensie/Susan Pevensie
Summary: Susan doesn’t believe anymore and it’s breaking Lucy’s heart.

( She's stopped believing. It's the knife in Lucy's heart. )

pairing: susan/lucy, fiction: narnia, character: lucy pevensie, character: susan pevensie

Comments 7

barbie_speidel July 11 2008, 03:50:09 UTC

Oh my gosh, that was so... heart breaking. Beautiful, breath taking... I loved it, you should write more femmeslash!

yazzigazzi July 11 2008, 20:47:39 UTC

Wow, that was really sad. Your characterisations are awesome, so true... I'm usually a Pedward shipper but this was also great. Great writing style and everything, keep on going!