EDMUND PEVENSIE - LINGER

[shyunpo]

Title: Linger
Fandom/Character: NARNIA; Edmund Pevensie
Summary: Just because Edmund doesn't bring it up, doesn't mean it doesn't linger.

Comments

[fishbowlolol]

*squeezes ed*

i feel like you just got him so right.

[alice_pike]

I really like this, especially the seventh paragraph. It's a very realistic look into Edmund's mind.

[eosrose]

A well thought out character piece.

Just one edit: "Edmund knows better know" ought to be "Edmund knows better now." Just a silly typo.

Thanks for sharing! I loved it.

[shyunpo]

Edited!

Sorry for that, haha. But thank you for pointing it out. I knew something was up with it. I appreciate it!

Glad you liked! ♥

[penguingeek]

Wow. This completely depicts Ed's character. Who he was when he entered Narnia, and after.

Gah, I'm sort of speechless right now. I think I meant to say something about how Edmund's mistakes linger and how I liked that detail, but I can't quite remember ^_^

Good job!

[ayascythe]

And THAT is exactly why I lovelovelove Edmund: because of his character development.
And you wrote him so well. Wonderful job!