re-write of a rough draft #1

[dirtyjew]

in the only picture i have left of you

you're flipping off the camera

i think it's pretty accurate

you always did say fuck you first

and introduce yourself second.

i keep it as a reminder of what not to turn into

see, i always knew you were broken

we shattered each other over whitewashed walls

and licked up the pieces when the nurses weren't

Comments

[shaesinister]

your poetry is so fuckin hard. that last line leaves like the silence after slammed door.