New Fic: Instinct (I've watched the Star Trek movie too many times)

[dirty_smudge]

So I watched Star Trek the day it came out. And I watched it again a few days later. And I torrented it the next day and watched it again. And I went to see it again the next week, and I watched it with my friend the other day because she'd torrented it. That's five times.
Every waking hour of every day, my mind is occupied with smut. Mostly

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[dirty_smudge]

Actually, I've never heard that song. I started mentioning wolves because of the friend I was writing this for.

Thanks very much for your feedback ^_^ I'm glad you thought it was so hot <3

[spuffyduds]

Whoa, that was steamy and a little scary, which is one of my favorite combos...mmm. And I love the paradox of "confining in its infinity."

[dirty_smudge]

It was a little scary for me too... glad you enjoyed ^_^

[16shadesofwild]

Very nicely done! I think this is so fitting, because it's how the mind (at least mine) works during masturbation. Fantasies tend to blend together, and it's completely believable for Spock to think of the people closest to him.

He was very much in character, and that was driven home by the fact that his need for Nyota warred with his desire.

This is just fantastically written, and if it matters, I think penis sounds normal from Spock. ^.^

[dirty_smudge]

Thanks. This is pretty much exactly how my mind works during masturbation, so I guess I'm glad it's familiar to someone else.

And yeah, I know penis sounds normal from Spock, but the word is not aesthetically pleasing when written down. The "e" looks kinda pathetic and the "i" is sticking up all over the place, and the "n" in the middle of sort of out-of-place and the "s" at the end is sharp and annoying.
Wow, that came out crazier than it sounded in my head.

[dirty_smudge]

Gah! Stop flailing! Calm down... breathe...

*makes out with you while you're distracted*

[emocezi]

:dies:

You had me at He's spent to long in space. Holy hell....can this get any better? Spock having fantasies over his crew members. :wibbles and falls over:

I'm having a little trouble breathing from all the mental images you've inflicted on me.

I liked the Checkov scene and the last one where Spock is imaging himself tied up, or getting used by both Jim and McCoy at the same time.

:computer shorts out from the blood and drool:

P.S. A nosebleed is used in anime to confer arousal. ;p

[dirty_smudge]

Ah yes, I wondered about the blood

Yeah, why is it that the idea of Jim and Bones using someone is so easily believable? If they were in a relationship fuck buddies, that's totally what they'd do.

Also, yay, I hoped people would like the Chekov scene. I got the idea watching two of my... "friends with benefits" doing each other. True story.

Thanks for reading <3