Candlelight

[dirty_smudge]

“Hey, look who it is! My replacement.”

Evan looked up from the ground where he’d been staring, mostly just to pass the time. He wasn’t surprised to see Aiden Ford standing in the doorway, watching him in amusement - the men who’d cut them down from the trap had mentioned the ex-Marine’s name just before they zapped Evan and his team with Wraith

Comments

[tekiclutch]

I'm pretty sure you already know this, but you win at life.

Ford's sense of voice in particular was dead-on. Very, very good.

[dirty_smudge]

I have been told that before, but it's nice to hear. Thank you very much :)

[syrenslure]

huh. woah. That was intense and strange in a good way, like you really got into Ford's twisted sense of reality and Lorne was trying to stay sane in the midst of it all. Good job.

[dirty_smudge]

I'm good at twisted sense of reality. That's what it's like in my brain.

Glad you liked :)

[echelon_ga_l]

Well I really don't like to pout when someone made me a present but... ohhh you know I don't like non-con ! *cries* I'll try to read it later, today, but I can't promise anything, I'm really not attracted in rapes.

[dirty_smudge]

It's OK, he only wants to play a little. It's not painful - it's actually pleasurable for Evan, he just doesn't want it.
Try it, you might like it :p

[meridith_smith]

Oh, wow! Just... seriously, wow. This is fascinating and extremely well-written and I was riveted to the screen all the way through. :)

It's just perfect the way it is, but I thought I'd mention that I'd totally love to see more. XD Which is rather unusual for me -- I'll read other pairings/stories besides McShep, but they don't usually leave me craving more like this one. So. Yes. This fic = Awesome. ^_^

[dirty_smudge]

Thanks! I don't think I'll write more - Ford and Lorne shouldn't really have any opportunity to meet and I had to twist canon a bit to get them together.
I suppose Ford could start stalking Lorne's team and kidnap him for more "playing"... but I won't write this pairing again any time soon. Too many other fish in the fandom. Or something.

Glad you liked :)

[anonymous]

WOW!

I never would have thought of Lorne/Ford as a pairing but man that was a good read. I'm drawn to non-con's (for some twisted reason) and this one was great... Love my Lorne!