[oneshot] Almost

[dinosaur_smile]

Title: Almost
Author: dinosaur_smile (exothermiac)
Fandom: Exo
Characters: Baekhyun, Chanyeol, Luhan, Sehun
Pairing: Baekyeol, Chanhan, Hunhan
Rating: R (Trigger warning: suicide, murder)

Comments

[dinosaur_smile]

Thanks for being the first to comment~! ^^ (sorry about the nightmares :P)

[dinosaur_smile]

Yes~! ^^ My first comment on LJ ever. :3 We're bonded for life now, kthx. <3

[dinosaur_smile]

Lol, yeah. I have no idea why I decided to make the happy virus a lunatic. Forgive me~ *pouts*

Thanks for commenting~

[jauneroux]

i can't find my heart where is it oh right it's deAD ALONG WITH BAEKHYUN,CHANYEOL AND LUHAN HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAHAHA?????

[dinosaur_smile]

*CPR*

Thanks for commenting~! :P

[kanji00]

oh my god wait, i'm imagining so many possible things that could've been in that box: a limb? a severed head? sehun'S BLOODY HEART RIPPED OUT OF HIS CHEST BY CHANYEOL? lolimsrry i am liking this too much "orz

i really like the twist in chanyeol and baekhyun's relationship, it starts out so fluffy and then the prom prank just goes wrong so right. i think most people probably know about the reality behind baekyeol's screwed up relationship (like that girl who really did change her face to resemble a celebrity's just to please her boyfriend), but my favorite excerpt is the one where you reveal baekhyun's dyed hair and MU jersey - the dread is so subtle, i got delicious chills * q *

also, for a second i thought u named this fic "The Loony Bin" and i chuckled out loud at the complete thematic irony, ok anyway, thanks for writing! <3

[dinosaur_smile]

Lol, it was Sehun's yucky heart >.< Good guess! Luhan said he wanted it~.

Thank you so much for commenting and reading~! ^^ <3

[baoxiu]

this is so beautiful

[dinosaur_smile]

I'm so glad you liked it~! Thank you so much for commenting! ^^

[baoxiu]

your writing style is really great and the progress of this story is quite fast paced, but i enjoyed it cries ok i love u