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dime_for_12

I Might Lose the Sun, 4/4

Jun 22, 2008 20:30

So, we're finally here. Now, for--
warnings before reading: major character death, dark!fic, some religious themes. Hope you guys enjoy!

I Might Lose the Sun, 4/4

He sees them, every once in a while. When he's walking through the woods, or looking out the windows of the little cabin, he can see...things moving; black shadows that ripple across his ( Read more... )

sam/dean, spn, imlts

Comments 24

rule_number_7 June 23 2008, 11:20:52 UTC

I feel like an idiot but what happens in the end?

dime_for_12 June 23 2008, 15:34:37 UTC

nah, it's okay. I'm sorry if it wasn't clear. Dean kills Sam; and the letter? is the address to the cabin where Sam had been renting (where his body's at, now).

lovetheguys June 23 2008, 14:38:50 UTC

Dean kills Sam! Oh, this is just unbearable! And now Bobby is supposed to go to Washington to find what? The bodies? To be killed, too? Nooooooooooooo, I can't take it, I just can't! (Weeps) Love, Robin

dime_for_12 June 23 2008, 15:36:13 UTC

*hands tissue* it'll be okay. and yeah, bobby's going to WA to find Sam's body; I guess even evil Dean still cares ;)

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dime_for_12 June 24 2008, 01:45:07 UTC

Thanks so much; feedback was slow on this and it left me wondering...but I'm glad you liked it! :)

faelescaloris June 24 2008, 13:45:24 UTC

Alright sister ... I literally had to psyche myself up to read this. ANGST?!?!? This isn't ANGST this is ... ouch. :| God. I have made a POINT of not reading ANY character death fics (and apparently I'm DIGGING random capitalize WORDS. Whatevz.)

So that being said. Oh ouch. Oh boys. >.< Jesus Christ. Someone already said how we knew what was going to happen and how it was going to end ... but we didn't KNOW and didn't ... couldn't think it. Oh my. :( Ooooh oh my. The imagery was just ... heart-wrenching. And the final scene between Sam and Dean .... oh. OOOhh. :( Jesus. And the figures Sam sees ... I just ... he was so lost and even with Dean there he was fighting to keep a part of Sam alive.

Oh gosh.

I'm going to go and read something fluffy. With bunnies and unicorns and cotton candy. :| You have broken my heart! And I need my heart!

and if a sequel were to appear I would totally read it and stalk you again
AND MY STRIKE THROUGH WORKS THIS TIME.

dime_for_12 June 24 2008, 15:19:07 UTC

Hey! I thought you'd see the warnings and not read. I'm so sorry to do that to you, but go read some happy endings *hugs*. And still, you leave me pretty compliments *YAY!* I'm glad you liked it and WOOT! for getting the strikethrough!
thanks so much!

faelescaloris June 24 2008, 19:09:46 UTC

Yeah I saw the warnings and thus the two days it took me to read it. >.> Angst with these boys hurts. LOL.

ivy_b September 1 2008, 10:02:15 UTC

I missed the 'major character death' warning, which I guess I deserve for not paying warnings much attention. I loved this series, the imagery, the angst and just the way you've described things, almost in a poetic way. I could just see it and feel Sam's pain and I loved the little flashbacks you had there. The ending confused me a bit, but now I got it and poor Sam! Poor Bobby! Yikes. Loved it and hated what it did to me while reading it.

dime_for_12 September 1 2008, 11:12:21 UTC

Hey, thanks so much. Most people had trouble with the end, and it is very vague, I know, so I'm sorry for any confusion. This thing turned out to be my baby, though, and even now I am reluctant to change it (partly b/c I'm afraid it'll make it even more head-scratching *headdesk*). I'm glad the rest was enjoyable ;), and--as always--I love the feedback *g*