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Stockholm Syndrome Chapter 9

Nov 27, 2009 14:26

Author: queenrileyTitle: Stockholm Syndrome ( Read more... )

Comments 13

theunspoken94 November 27 2009, 19:50:55 UTC

I like Ziggy as this is a crazy way, he's just falling apart now. I thought that he would like to be free but, it's going to go downhill by the looks of it. Dillon's awfully sad. He had been finding Ziggy for a month and now, he's trying to comfort him and Ziggy's pushing away. For once in life, why can't Tenaya just come in and give Ziggy a hug? Please update!

queenriley November 28 2009, 00:14:13 UTC

Thanks for the review! Ziggy really is having a hard time of things.

buni_in_the_sky November 27 2009, 21:27:10 UTC

D: oooh no. ;_; You could feel Ziggy's uneasiness in the writing as it went. I hope he gets better, or Tenaya escapes Venjix. I hope she doesn't die. D: But then that would add to more amazing drama. XD Poor Dillon, Poor Tenaya and Ziggy! D: Your writing is amazing, and you know I love this story.

queenriley November 28 2009, 00:15:53 UTC

Thanks! Poor Ziggy. He just can't win here. I do seem to like torturing the poor lad, don't I?

I have two endings planned... may have to write them both and make one a bonus "alternate" thing.

bowsie22 November 28 2009, 00:52:38 UTC

Poor Ziggy. Poor everyone. I love this. I hope you update again soon :D

queenriley November 28 2009, 14:43:35 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you like the story.

brolem November 28 2009, 01:17:24 UTC

Yay! I love drama!

I especially love how much Ziggy is disappointing everyone.

Will someone actually discover he has Stockholm Syndrome?

queenriley November 28 2009, 14:44:55 UTC

Oh my, quite the compliment! When I saw you had reviewed, I was actually nervous. Your constructive criticism is invaluable, but I'm always worried I'll get the "Well it's okay but..." comments. But this! Thank you!

As for somebody discovering... well... you'll just have to wait and see. ;)

m14mouse November 28 2009, 04:52:50 UTC

Wow...::Cuddles Ziggy.:: Poor guy. Just poor Ziggy and Dillon. I just don't have any words to describe it. Just awesome work. I am so glad you updated and I am glad everything is getting better for you.

queenriley November 28 2009, 14:45:44 UTC

*smishes the mousey* Thanks for reviewing. Things are getting better... slowly but surely. I'm glad the story is working, that you're enjoying it.