Topic: Lost

[ryosato]

Title: Absent
Series: 02
Characters: Hikari and Taichi, but in a sibling-only way, not a coupling way. x.x; - also some light shonen-ai and shojo-ai hints for other couplings.
Rating: Um... G?
Word Count: 299
Topic: Lost

Comments

[codename_windy]

Suuuure you don't have a brother complex, Hikari. ^^;; *petpet*. It may not be as dirty as Takeru's, but... yeeeeah. ^_^;;; Still wanting oniichan to come and protect you is kinda brother-complexy, dear.

As for Taichi... tsk tsk, I do believe it's somewhat bad manners to check your cel-phone messages in the middle of a date. *shakes head*. Of course, good manners were never exactly Taichi's strong point, sooo... XP

I do think the drabble is good. Very in-character and I like how you added all those little elements and references into it, especially the actual episode references. That makes it seem really believable. I just personally can't really identify... never had a big brother, so I'm not the best to say how complex-like Hikari is being. XP

[larlar_ulysses]

Awwww~! I'm so glad you told me about this and pointed me to the community too *happy*

I really liked this drabble, it was so full of feelings, all different kinds, just so much fitted in to such a small number of words and I always envy people who can do that and you do it SO WELL! I feel bad for Hikari although, you know, Taichi has a life to lead too, you know *pokes her* But she's silly, of course he'll always be there for you! That's what we do!

[mathkid]

Awwww! I love the Yagami siblings, they have such a cool relationship. Taichi's so cool! His little sister always comes first! Makes me wish I had an older brother.

I got kind of lost in the "that person"'s -- Me: ??? Taichi's dating... Yamato and Hikari has a crush on him? No, wait... Yamato's dating Sora? No, Taichi's dating Sora? @_@ But then I read the note and figured it out. =)

(Is anyone else getting flashes of episode 13? Takeru: Taichi, Taichi! You don't always have to go to him!)

[six_crazy_guys]

I got kind of lost in the "that person"'s

I had that reaction too until I read ryosato's explanations.

[salmon_pink]

Awww, their relationship is so sweet, makes me wish my big brother wasn't such a c**kf**k! And it's so like Hikari, to angst alone, even though she needs people there; I can so imagine her phone message as being "Taichi come home ... or don't, you're obviously busy ... But I really need to talk to you ... But don't rush home, or anything ... I'm miserable ... I hope you're enjoying your date ... *sniffle* Sorry to disturb you." Bless her. And Taichi's reaction is perfect big brother thought-train - when in doubt, go to violence!

[perpetual_poet]

Yikes, the 'that persons' were a bit confusing. I was thinking Hikari/Jun for a minute. It was sweet, though. Taichi and Hikari do have a sweet relationship... much better than the one I have with MY little brother. We're more like Jun and Daisuke!