Title: Meeting
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hola_meg_a_colaRating: PG-13
Fandom: House, M.D.
Pairing: House/Cuddy undertones
Summary: Greg House was certainly a man that no one could forget, to say the least. Even after twenty years, Lisa Cuddy still remembers her first encounter with the man, not that it was very hard to forget…
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100-90 = A
89-80 = B
79-70 = C
Etc. Then, all of the number grades would be averaged, and the student would be given a letter grade of A, B, C, etc. for the course which, when computing grade point average, would then be converted to 4.0 (A), 3.0 (B), 2.0 (C), etc.
And for what it's worth, a 3.0 would be equal to a B, and a 2.75 would be a B-. At least in my school, that's how it is.
Since your profile says that you're in high school in the U.S., I'm sure this is all familiar to you, but I wanted to write it out anyway.
:)
I enjoyed the fic! I always love reading the different variations about how House and Cuddy first met.
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Yesh, unfortunately I'm still in high school and what's more unfortunate is that my school goes by the 7 point grading system:
100-93 = A
92-85 = B
And so on..
And thanks for liking~ The college years are such an unexplored area that it gives you a lot to work with :3
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You kept both characters completely IC and their banter was very realistic.
Of course, any reference to House admiring Cuddy's girls is always welcome, especially if it makes said admiration span for several years.
I absolutely loved it!
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Concrit: 'Pasture' should be 'Pasteur' (I think your spellchecker nabbed it!). The only problem I have with your writing is an occasional tell instead of showing: "She was a perfectionist" for example. It's more involving if you show that through her actions (which you did, in fact), rather than telling the reader. Also, start a new paragraph every time somebody new speaks.
And keep writing in this fandom, please!
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Ah, the new paragraph thingy. My friend, my foe. *shakes fist in air* I'm working on that bad boy.
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Your characterization is fairly sweet, and I do like that they're establishing the groundwork for the people we know they're going to be come. Clearly you have their personas down very well, so that part really shines through.
(It's all right, not alright, and she would be swollen with pride, not swelled. I wouldn't have said anything but you asked for concrit so I'm including them.I'd advise a Beta. I use one, and several of the writers here do too--they are worth their weight in gold for stuff like this!)
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Your comments about my characterization made me feel better. I avoided writing "House" fiction because I was afraid of screwing up the characters we know and love with the exception of Cameron.
Thanks again~
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