"Oh Havoc"

[diet_otaku]

Title: "Oh Havoc"
Author: hola_meg_a_cola
Rating: PG-13
Sch-warning: Mmm, nothing too bad.
Genre: Comedy/Romance
Setting: None.
Disclaimer: I own nothing. It belongs to Arakawa-sensei.
Summary: [Oneshot] [RoyAi] [Past HavocAi] "When she had said that she had previously dated Havoc, he couldn’t help but be jealous."
Author's Notes: This was inspired from galuxkitty's

Comments

[ceasefire]

I love you *_* Combining my two favourite pairings into one fic~ *CRASHTACKLES*

I'm sure Jean has moved on with Taki. XD And her glass-cutting nipples.

[hola_meg_a_cola]

RoyAi and HavocAi are both excellent though RoyAi is superior XD

Havoc will watch as Taki carves ice sculptures with her nipples XD

[ceasefire]

Depends whether she and Havoc get to the nipple-twisting and the scrotal jackhammer beforehand or not. [/drawn together]

[crack_alchemist]

*rattles the bushes*

now that was very nice! i like the whole roy-being-actually-jealous-of-havoc thing... sort of a comeuppance for him in my mind. for once it's the shoe on the other foot!

*applauds*

[hola_meg_a_cola]

Thanku! I've always loved Jealous!Roy. It humanizes the enigma that is Roy Mustang. Plus, he's just too darn cute when he's jealous; like a moping five year old XD

[mandy138]

Wonderful little story! Everyone was in character and the Roy being jealous scenario was entirely believeable. Riza's little personal quirks on off-time were adorable and I think quite the actual mannerisms she would do; ie, the sitting cross-legged on the bed and tucking hair while Roy turns towards her. That is just the cutest little scene. XD

Techinicalities:

ALWAYS start a new paragraph for every speech change. Meaning, Roy and Riza should NOT talk in the same paragraph. Example: She studied him carefully before she said, “Is something bothering you, Roy?” Quickly, he shook his head and nuzzled Riza’s neck. “No, no…”

Roy himself was not very tall for a man, standing at only 5’7

Type it all out. Five foot seven. Numerals are only used for years (1967; 2005) or for impact (The door at the end of the hall marked with a big haunting stenciled number. The number 13 burned into his retinas and he could still see it for nights afterwards on closed eyelids.).

and was built fare enough

Should be 'fair' (possibly 'fairly') =)

Well

[hola_meg_a_cola]

My grammar has been pwned! Then again, it was shit to begin with XD Thanks for the advice ^.^

Glad you liked it. I haven't written RoyAi in months and you know what they say: absence makes the heart grow fonder ^.^

[mandy138]

Oh, man, was it a much needed and refreshing break! =D

Haven't read anything this cute in awhile, sadly.

[kuchenhexe]

This was cute. I can't help but like jealous!Roy. XD

Also, possible typo. Did you mean 'fair' or 'fare'?

[hola_meg_a_cola]

I love Jealous!Roy. He's my guilty pleasure XD Glad you liked it ^.^

I wasn't sure whether it was 'fair' or 'fare' so I rock paper scissored it XP

[kuchenhexe]

^_^

Considering the definition of fare, yes, in the context in which the word appears, you want fair. ^_^

[automail_is_fun]

YAY for HavocAi~!

*luff*

this was cute, I loved it~! (and mind you, though it may not seem that way, I'm very picky on my fics.)

^.^

~Sarah

[hola_meg_a_cola]

Thanks, glad you liked it! HavocAi is super; very underrated.

*officially knows too many "Sarah"s who spell their name like that XD*