Title: "Oh Havoc"
Author:
hola_meg_a_colaRating: PG-13
Sch-warning: Mmm, nothing too bad.
Genre: Comedy/Romance
Setting: None.
Disclaimer: I own nothing. It belongs to Arakawa-sensei.
Summary: [Oneshot] [RoyAi] [Past HavocAi] "When she had said that she had previously dated Havoc, he couldn’t help but be jealous."
Author's Notes: This was inspired from
galuxkitty's
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I'm sure Jean has moved on with Taki. XD And her glass-cutting nipples.
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Havoc will watch as Taki carves ice sculptures with her nipples XD
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now that was very nice! i like the whole roy-being-actually-jealous-of-havoc thing... sort of a comeuppance for him in my mind. for once it's the shoe on the other foot!
*applauds*
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Techinicalities:
ALWAYS start a new paragraph for every speech change. Meaning, Roy and Riza should NOT talk in the same paragraph. Example: She studied him carefully before she said, “Is something bothering you, Roy?” Quickly, he shook his head and nuzzled Riza’s neck. “No, no…”
Roy himself was not very tall for a man, standing at only 5’7
Type it all out. Five foot seven. Numerals are only used for years (1967; 2005) or for impact (The door at the end of the hall marked with a big haunting stenciled number. The number 13 burned into his retinas and he could still see it for nights afterwards on closed eyelids.).
and was built fare enough
Should be 'fair' (possibly 'fairly') =)
Well ( ... )
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Glad you liked it. I haven't written RoyAi in months and you know what they say: absence makes the heart grow fonder ^.^
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Haven't read anything this cute in awhile, sadly.
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Also, possible typo. Did you mean 'fair' or 'fare'?
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I wasn't sure whether it was 'fair' or 'fare' so I rock paper scissored it XP
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Considering the definition of fare, yes, in the context in which the word appears, you want fair. ^_^
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*luff*
this was cute, I loved it~! (and mind you, though it may not seem that way, I'm very picky on my fics.)
^.^
~Sarah
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*officially knows too many "Sarah"s who spell their name like that XD*
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