Wow! Very very very pretty, I absolutely love the flowing feel to it. It wasn't boring at all! It's so peaceful and natural, and it's soothing to think that the characters will really have such a healing future. There are many "future life" fics, but this one is especially well done. ^_^ ♥♥♥
My one o.O! moment was the "we're friends with Seimei and Nisei" part. It completely threw me. I'm intrigued to know your reasoning behind that decision... will you write more to explain? :D
Thank you very much for your comment, I'm glad you felt the way you did.
And yes, I will certainly elaborate on the comment with Seimei and Nisei. This story is actually concentrated on a night between the four of them and what stems from that moment. I want to write about the relationship Soubi and Ritsuka have with those two, how Ritsuka struggles to accept how normal every one acts about it and how wrong it feels.
I haven't read loveless fanfics in a while, but I suspect this isn't how future fics usually broach the topic. It's an experiment on my part, and we'll just have to see what the reactions are. :)
Oh, my. o_o I can personally relate to the way they're acting in this, especially Ritsuka... I can't help but wonder how you captured such emotion... But it was beautiful. ♥
I also read the other story you linked to (I think I've read it before, but I didn't comment?) and it was just as lovely. I hope you write more. ^^
I love the way you characterized Ritsuka. I think you really captured the way he thinks. All of your descriptions painted a wonderful picture with just the right amount of detail! I always cringe when I know it's going to be a future fic, because all those that I have read make it so unbelievable. This was great. Great great! I love thinking about them both as students just enjoying the companionship of each other, even while existing in their own worlds. It's a very personal feeling for me.
I, too, was really shocked about Seimei and Nisei! I still don't wanna believe it! Can't wait for the next installment!
That was beautiful ! I truly hope you share more of your work with us and I'll be more than happy to follow the story as it develops. Again I say B_E_A_U_T_I_F_U_L !!
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My one o.O! moment was the "we're friends with Seimei and Nisei" part. It completely threw me. I'm intrigued to know your reasoning behind that decision... will you write more to explain? :D
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And yes, I will certainly elaborate on the comment with Seimei and Nisei. This story is actually concentrated on a night between the four of them and what stems from that moment. I want to write about the relationship Soubi and Ritsuka have with those two, how Ritsuka struggles to accept how normal every one acts about it and how wrong it feels.
I haven't read loveless fanfics in a while, but I suspect this isn't how future fics usually broach the topic. It's an experiment on my part, and we'll just have to see what the reactions are. :)
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I also read the other story you linked to (I think I've read it before, but I didn't comment?) and it was just as lovely. I hope you write more. ^^
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I, too, was really shocked about Seimei and Nisei! I still don't wanna believe it! Can't wait for the next installment!
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thank you for writing and sharing.
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I truly hope you share more of your work with us and I'll be more than happy to follow the story as it develops.
Again I say B_E_A_U_T_I_F_U_L !!
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