[fanfiction] Being Human

Feb 09, 2011 18:45

Title: Being Human

Author: didgeridoodle 
Rating: G
Genre: A bit of angst, but mostly fluff.
Characters: Chibimerica, England
Pairings: None.
Word Count: 2,576
Warnings: Some swearing on England's part.

Summary: All it takes is a single kiss to the cheek to prove that England is still human.

Notes: Written for the first day of usxuk 's Sweethearts Week. And in the nick of ( Read more... )

category: oneshot, genre: angst, fanfiction, character: england, character: america, genre: romance/fluff, fandom: hetalia axis powers

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lost_hitsu February 9 2011, 12:30:12 UTC
This was beautiful! I loved how the themes of the first kiss/healing kiss merged together and you managed to describe the beach so vivid I can really see it.

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didgeridoodle February 13 2011, 04:51:19 UTC
Ahh, thank you! :) I'm a sucker for parallelisms like that, haha. It makes everything come close to a full circle! I've been feeling apprehensive about my descriptions, so hearing that from you is a big relief and kind of a confidence boost, to be honest, haha.

Again, thanks so much for reading and commenting!

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nasty_show February 9 2011, 14:21:21 UTC
You have quite a way with words dear Sir! This is so tender and beautiful. I love the idea and how you developed it. Your little America is beyond adorable. ♥

You've made me want to go to the beach now too, and for someone that hates the beach, that's good work!

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didgeridoodle February 13 2011, 14:22:00 UTC
Thanks so much for the compliments! ♥ You're making me blush, haha. I'm not too big on beaches, too, but I had just to channel the positive sides of my beach excursions somewhere. As an Australia fan, I feel such a hypocrite saying that, haha.

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didgeridoodle February 13 2011, 14:29:01 UTC
Hope I don't disappoint! Sabog-sabog ko magsulat eh, hahaha.

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madlytae February 9 2011, 16:33:04 UTC
Magic kisses. The premise is wonderful especially England's remark on white magic and remembering firsts. Oh England. America is a cute itty bitty. Thanks for sharing!

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didgeridoodle February 13 2011, 14:41:40 UTC
England's snark is probably one of his better points, haha. :) Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

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jazzchyk February 9 2011, 16:40:06 UTC
<3

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didgeridoodle February 13 2011, 14:42:13 UTC
Squee, thank you! I'm glad it didn't disappoint, haha. :)

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