Comments | dictionarysays: (SMAP) Oh say you can see Or of blindfolds and snark

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(SMAP) Oh say you can see Or of blindfolds and snark

Oct 03, 2011 17:54

Oh Say Can You See Or Of Blindfolds and Snark
Nakai/Kimura | R | 2,254 words

Wrote this badboy for the jekinkmeme, found it again while trolling through my unfinished stuff and figured I might as well post it. But SERIOUSLY. Why do I write so much 2top? They need to stop it with their dynamic obviously not really.

( The keys are still in the ignition and the headlights are hot on the back of his knees )

rating: arrr, je: super men always perfect, length: 1-shot, genre: romance, pairing: kimura/nakai, fan!fic

Comments 5

faiee October 3 2011, 22:39:53 UTC

OMG the line you cut was awesome. THIS WAS AWESOME. <33 There never is too much hot 2Top fics out there although there's certainly room for other SMAP pairing fics :DD

Will Might be back with a longer comment! Don't wanna leave you hanging just for me to forget :P BUT KNOW THIS WAS AWESOME. Clueless Nakai and sexy obliging Kimura ♥♥ AND SQUIRREL TEETH. Guh. BJs are sexy, esp. when Nakai can't see ;) And his hipthrusts have to be awesomely choking Kimura because we all know what those hips can do...

girltype October 3 2011, 22:51:13 UTC

The blindfold isn't my style at all but OMG. the two tops. The dialog was TOP NOTCH. I think I laughed at all of Nakai's lines!

“I’m only consenting because I don’t want to break up SMAP.”

I. CAN'T ^______________^

christwong1060 October 4 2011, 02:27:58 UTC

aww so you're the one who wrote this xD Love it so much, cause the blindfolds are so hot, so provoking. But you should have written more, cause how could you stop at Nakai's orgasm. Where's Kimura's? It's unfair lol

And I doubt that you'll be able to stop writing about 2Tops, cause their recent interactions are getting more and more inspirational :p You should have written more, my dear.

nunuuu October 6 2011, 23:44:28 UTC

OMG YOU SHOULD TOTALLY WRITE MORE! FINISH THOSE UNFINISHED...SHIT ON YOUR COMPUTER (WHICH I'M PRETTY SURE ISN'T SHITTY AT ALL, IF THIS FIC IS ANYTHING TO GO BY) AND SLOG THROUGH YOUR DRAWERS FOR EVERYTHING THAT HASN'T SEEN THE LIGHT OF DAY! Seriously! <3

2top isn't totally my thing, but omg, I love how you write their dynamic ♥ And your choice of words, and the way you phrase things: it's hilarious and meandering yet absolutely on the mark. Your writing actually makes me hear Kimura's laugh and dogs barking while they get it on and the way they shuffle around on the couch in such a hot mess! BRILLIANT. ALSO, JUST WONDERING WHY KIMURA IS SO BLOODY SEXY, EVEN IN A FIC?

“You asked for it, dipshit.”
LOL omg give it to me babyyyyy Nakai was powerless and he asked for it, ugh

Write more, Buhlaineyyy, write more. ♥

hereticpop October 7 2011, 11:58:28 UTC

I relate to Nakai a lot right now: I don't know what I came here for and what I am trying to accomplish, but there was no way to get away from it ( ... )