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fic: the object of longing

Oct 01, 2009 03:51

Title: The Object of Longing
Pairing: TYL 8059, 1859
Fandom: Katekyo Hitman Reborn!
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Characters are not mine
Note: This is a companion fic to Stray Capacitance. Beta done by the incredibly sweet theotherdenise and written for my other-crazy-half,
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!185980, !8059, fiction, !5980, @reborn!, !1859

Comments 38

lampazo_libre September 30 2009, 20:56:44 UTC

I hope I’m the first and no one has stolen my place here. \o/
Have thanked you already for this, but. What the hell. It’s not enough. Never.
Wifey! Thank you! You’re making this world brighter with your glowing awesomeness, and also with glowing awesomeness of your works! Oh god. You. Shit. I’m still rather eloquent, see?
Now, to the sheer win.
Really, you have a rather articulate style - it varies, but I can tell whether it’s your or not who have written the fic without knowing author.
And. So much love in one story. The entire fic about love.
Yamamoto. The ultimate vessel for love. I think it’s leaking from him.
Your smut. I love it. It’s touchable and natural and uh, hot, even if it wasn’t your point here. And it leaves you raw a little, like everything you write does.
Yamamoto’ laughing at them falling - brilliant, I can so see it.
Takeshi’s life wasn’t always about Hayato.Oh god, most time it’s forgotten. Love your passage, and how you built it up to his love, and THANK YOU, you’ve mentioned Hayato wasn’t the first. Haru looks ( ... )

FFFFFFFFFF..... dicks October 1 2009, 09:08:49 UTC

kskhajlkal yours. I think yama's the easiest character to write because he could be anything behind his smiling face. he's a pervert and that's canon \o/ hahah. Anyway, when I wrote this, it wasn't supposed to end that way but the fic took its own turn and fuck I couldn't even control what I wrote anymore. orz And you know how much I'm gay for Gokudera, I couldn't help whoring him more (hahaha u noticed the red shirt cameo) and thank you bb for your support and lovelovelove and your awesomeness and ILU forever and ever.

FLAGGING!

/can't help it

XDD

prek_drugz September 30 2009, 21:17:16 UTC

D:
I love this <3
I really do, it perfectly fits it in with the other fic.
I liked how it had this constant sad feeling about it, or it did for me.
Tis be really cool if you could make another fic to answer those lingering questions it left me with.
Like I really want to know which one Hayato will pick, it's going to bug me to no end.

ur icon matches mine lol dicks October 1 2009, 09:14:33 UTC

Thank you so much. \o/ Tell you the truth I don't even know who he'd pick in the end. hahhaa. I plan to write another one from Hibari's pov but well shkajsl-- we'll see. XDD

Thank you. <3

Icon matching party~ prek_drugz October 3 2009, 17:12:41 UTC

O: GASP
That makes went want to know even more!
(o 3o) You should sooooo write one in Hibari's point of view, no more like you WILL write a story in his pov : D
I'll be waiting >w>;;

NO, thank you <3

Re: Yay icon PARTYYYYY~ dicks October 3 2009, 20:31:59 UTC

\o/\o/\o/
I will try unless Hibari bites me to death first. lol

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theotherdenise September 30 2009, 21:33:50 UTC

I hope you can look back at this fic again and like it more. It's a great companion to the first fic, and rounds out the overall story. And I'll stop repeating myself now XD The changes you've made definitely make it flow better, though. \o/

Also, I was overjoyed at the thought of you writing Hibari's POV. I really hope you can get into it, even if he is one of those slightly offputting complex characters to write. I think you could do justice to his perspective. :D

thank you! dicks October 1 2009, 09:23:48 UTC

Thank you thank youthankyou! You know I can never thank you enough for betaing my fics all this while. Hahhaa. Writing on Hibari's pov is one thing but trying to come out with a less fucked-up ending is another. \o/ I never really written him before, well once but the fic wasn't really about him so that didn't count. lol. But really, it would be a nice change to write him for once. \o/\o/\o/ And thanks again. For everything. <3

dtn September 30 2009, 23:11:32 UTC

I totally was reading this at work and was probably drooling all over the keyboard. This was just so amazing ;-; ♥

FFFFFFfff dicks October 1 2009, 09:26:11 UTC

You read porn at work? lol. Awesome. \o/\o/\o/hahahha. Anyway thank you. XDD

Re: FFFFFFfff dtn October 1 2009, 23:06:55 UTC

Yeah, sometimes on gallery nights when I'm counting people I occasionally have my browser open to some 8059 porn. :| I'm that bored.
Ahahah you're welcome~ I love your writing. \o/♥

makemegray September 30 2009, 23:25:03 UTC

YES! GO YAMA! MARK YOUR TERRITORY! HIBARI CAN GO FUCK HIMSELF!

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*ahem*

dicks October 1 2009, 09:30:02 UTC

Hibari fucking himself. UNF. The image stuck in my brain. kshakakja and Yama's growing fangs. hahah. Oh you-- <3