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fic: Tad Ridiculous

Mar 20, 2011 20:45

Title: Tad Ridiculous
Pairing: TYL!80TYE!59, 8059
Fandom: Katekyo Hitman Reborn!
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Not mine
Beta: Beta by theotherdenise but so much has changed, and so all remaining mistakes are mine and mine alone.
Note: Was initially written for 8059 novel anthology but I've decided to write a new (lighter?) fic for that because this fic is too urrmm ( Read more... )

!8059, fiction

Comments 23

hornithorynque March 20 2011, 10:10:00 UTC

First wheee (for once lalalala)
I understood more things after reading it a second time ! Maybe b'cause you changed some stuff, I don't know xD But yeaah... ah... Gokudera. Know the future must be like, the most disturbing thing ever. You show it well.

dicks March 21 2011, 13:35:14 UTC

Heheh thank you :P

foolish_somnium March 20 2011, 10:20:40 UTC

To be honest, this leaves me feeling and confused and every word that I read of this kept picking my mind apart, tearing chunks and pieces and thoughts from me, and now they are swirling all around and it's chaotic and peaceful and I try to pick something from the mess around me to describe how much I enjoyed your words and how I was swayed by them and how this keeps making more and more sense, and this comment makes no sense, but- I picture Gokudera thinking like this, analyzing and being stuck and moving on at the same time, and just- ugh, maybe it would be better say that this is really really gorgeous and stop babbling.Yeah. So, this is really really gorgeous.
(And weird is definitely good, definitely amazing.)

dicks March 21 2011, 13:38:20 UTC

Thank you so much. I guess this fic a little confusing because I have the tendency to rant in my own fic :P I didn't even make sense to me sometimes. But I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks you \o/

beruichi March 20 2011, 10:27:57 UTC

Oooh, I'm a sucker for dark, philosophical, psychological, internal conflict-themed stories like this. *A* Yours is absolutely freaking brilliant.

I want Takeshi but Takeshi is Yamamoto, and the sheer thought of it is just not fucking graspable.
This. Line. It broke my brain. But I mean it in a good way. XD IDK, every word seems to hit a nerve. I guess your story-telling is just so powerful like that. *A*

And Descartes FTW. I miss having philo classes. |D

dicks March 21 2011, 13:40:08 UTC

You took philosophy? I wish I did though haha because so many thing I've missed!

ALso thanks so much for reading and enjoying, seriously. <3

beruichi March 22 2011, 14:14:15 UTC

I just took a few classes 'cause they were required. XD
But I enjoyed every bit of them 'cause philo is mind-bogglingly interesting. |D

No, thank YOU for writing awesome stuff like this. :3 The emotions hit so close to home for some reason. *A*
/is channeling her inner Gokudera lol, my what now? XD

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dicks March 21 2011, 13:41:46 UTC

That would be interesting. Thought I bet it's ende with less thank 1k words because, seriously, hahaha I'm such a blah person. There's nothing interesting to write about orz

Also, GOOD MORNING HAHAHAH \o/ /hugs

theotherdenise March 20 2011, 11:10:14 UTC

I started reading this and was trying to remember it. But it's been a while, so I can't tell how much you've changed! That's good though, because some of the vivid imagery that had stayed with me the first time was given new context. I wouldn't say this is weird! For such a complex subject, you've presented it very neatly, so all the little bits come together to make sense at the end - order within chaos, as it were. I probably said that before, lol. And how many references are packed into this? I lost count. You really have a superb sense for details.

Anyway, I really like this story. It's thought provoking, but not in a way that distracts from the overall themes. And it's a powerful piece of writing. The sort that you excel at ;3; <3

Unconnected, except that this just sort of reminded me. I haven't been keeping up with the current arc in KHR but I heard that the last chapter referenced the Holographic Principle. Hooray! Black holes are cool. I did write something in celebration, but I don't know if it makes any sense OTL

dicks March 21 2011, 13:50:20 UTC

You did a fantastic job in betaing my fic sometimes I don;t even know how to thank you. I made a little changes, tried to soften it a bit but nahh not working hahha. Also thank you so much!

Ooooh I agree. This black hole stuff is cool \o/ (just read the last chap few days ago. Late lol) But dudeeee, you wrote something. Do post it! I am a cat. Curious, curious now

theotherdenise March 21 2011, 20:08:34 UTC

Aww, don't worry about it! I enjoy being part of the process. I think it's fine as it is!

I like how some people were all BLACK HOLES DON'T WORK THAT WAY but they're fine with, you know, crossing parallel universes and magic babies and any of the other craziness the series regularly throws at us. I will post it, just because I've been so inactive for so long. It is nonsense, though. lol