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Fic: Opportunity Knocks [Part II]

Jan 22, 2012 14:34

Title: Opportunity Knocks (Part II of II)
Author: diane_kepler
Length: 2700 wds for this part, 4400 words overall
Rating: NC-17
Fandom: Breaking Bad
Characters: Walt / genderswapped Jesse
Genre: angst, BDSM, drama, dubcon, and het. Pretty much PWP, yo.
Spoilers: Season 3x12
Summary: Jessie's run of self-destructive behavior has got to stop.
Shout-outs: If there ( Read more... )

teh kink, heisen-lurv, pr0n, respect the chemistry, s-s-s-scenage, authorship

Comments 13

readishmael January 22 2012, 22:46:57 UTC

Thanks for the shout-out; it's nice to know I was of service.

I don't know quite how I feel about this piece on the whole, but I find it fascinating. It keeps coming back into my head.

diane_kepler January 22 2012, 22:54:26 UTC

LOL, your timing.

Of course I'd rather have you loving the heck out of this story, but it's quite gratifying that you even helped improve it. Seriously, you are such an awesome beta. I'm your beta-fangirl now. And if it keeps popping back into your head, so much the better. Maybe you'll come to like it one day. Although, since this is a BB fic, maybe an uneasy truce would be most fitting.

readishmael January 22 2012, 23:18:53 UTC

LOL, your timing.

Heh, I know! It's kind of absurd.

I may not be up to heaping love on it, exactly, but I can say unreservedly that I think the fic is awesome and that you need to keep writing for this fandom. Your characterization is so well-observed, both in how it deals with the canon and in how it deals with gender roles. I'm glad this fic exists and that I was able to help you with it. But the content is just...you know, a thing. A thing that makes this fic not for me.

Seriously, you are such an awesome beta. I'm your beta-fangirl now.

Thanks so much.

diane_kepler January 22 2012, 23:29:35 UTC

It's simply delightful when you say things about my writing like "Your characterization is so well-observed, both in how it deals with the canon and in how it deals with gender roles." Please excuse me? I won't be a moment.

*clears throat* *bounces around the parlor while emitting high-pitched noises of fangirlish delight*

There we go. Much better now.

sydpenguinbunny January 23 2012, 11:04:02 UTC

Rawr!! Kink at 6AM - yay! ...Hot... Yum. lol

Why do I get the feeling that during Walt & Skyler's playtimes, it was Skyler tying up Walt and not the other way around? :P

diane_kepler January 28 2012, 20:46:47 UTC

LOL, I could totally see Sky being all "mrowr" on Walt lying there trussed up like a turkey and feeling more than a little ridiculous.

sydpenguinbunny January 29 2012, 01:50:07 UTC

LOL yes... I think it'd go about as effectively as Hank and Marie's roleplay did :P

diane_kepler January 29 2012, 23:37:17 UTC

I kind've want to write this :)

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sinloi January 25 2012, 18:36:45 UTC

I think I want to have your babies. More girl!Jesse? Please. I'd offer to write something in return, but my writing skills seem rudimentary at best. Anyway, this was more spectacular than I could've ever imagined.

And you need a medal. A big, big one.

diane_kepler January 25 2012, 23:16:59 UTC

Aww, thank you muchly. What did you like best? You see, I need to know this, not only to feed my enormous ego, but to write future stuff that will appeal.

As for moar, there are plenty of things you could offer "in exchange". What are your favorite tracks for a girl!Jesse playlist? More to the point, what are some ideas you'd like to see written up? Let's feed off each other's creativity.