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diandraxsnape

The Dumping and Chapter Two

Nov 16, 2007 17:05

So...I did it! I dumped M! He didn't take it exaclty the right way, but I didn't expect him to. It was really out of the blue; I didn't actually give fair warning. I feel horrible, one of my friends told me that he was miserable. I wasn't quite sure how to go about the whole thing, so I just winged (I know that's incorrect, but 'wung' sounds ( Read more... )

y, sirius/remus, slash, dumping, life, m

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brighty18 November 17 2007, 02:42:22 UTC

First, congrats on your break-up. I mean that in he sense of having the strength to do it. Obviously, I have no idea about the circumstances - only that you seem happy about it.

Anyway, nice job on this! You truly take the reader back on forth on Sirius. He seems so smug and self-centered one minute and so fragile the next. Very well done. Still, I feel for Remus!

Great installment!

diandraxsnape November 17 2007, 15:17:08 UTC

Haha, I am happy about it (isn't that horrible?) so thank you!

I'm pleased you like this one as well! I think that he was supposed to seem that way. Anyway, that's how I see him. Ah yes, poor Remus. I always make him suffer far too much.

Thanks again!

brighty18 November 17 2007, 15:48:17 UTC

Not to psychoanalyze a fiction character but...

I can see Sirius thinking this way because that's the way he was taught to think growing up. I mean, his mother showed him virtually no love, so he'd probably have little confidence that someone could love him just for who he is. I imagine that Snape's childhood issues plague him, too.