Title: Winter Coat
Rating: PG-13
Characters/Pairings: Hound, Mirage, several OC Decepticons
Summary: Hound can see underneath the cold exterior that Mirage uses to protect himself. Knowing what's wrong doesn't make helping him any easier, however.
Warnings: Violence
A/N: Thanks goes to
naggingfishwife for betaing. As she noted, this is my longest chapter yet. The
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I have a real love for inexperienced Mirage, in both senses of the word XD
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*grins* Awesome chapter. I'm so glad Hound found Mirage... though was there any doubt he would?
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Unfortunately, just because Mirage avoided being the center of discontent for this doesn't mean there isn't plenty more to come for the others to get angry at him for. *Diabolical grin*
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Can't wait to see what happens next :3
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I think heroically stupid is my new favorite phrase. It describes almost all of the Autobots so well. And it is a good thing Mirage has Hound, not only as back up, but someone to make sure he doesn't get all mopey.
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I also loved that even though Mirage is inexperienced he is not defenseless and can kick the crap out of at least one decepticon with his hands tied behind his back.
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I initially had a much more evil cliffhanger in mind, but then I realized the chapter was getting pretty long, and I wanted to leave some story for the next one, and the sort of cliffhanger I had in mind is done a lot. This one worked out better; although, all of the big 'NOOO's would've been hilarious.
Haha, Mirage can now point to evidence that he can beat someone with at least one hand tied behind his back XD I have a little bit of personal cannon that Mirage had some previous self-defense training, mostly in aiming for weak points in his attacker and using his opponent's weight and own movements against them.
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