Fic: Winter Coat (5/?)

Feb 01, 2011 06:54

 Title: Winter Coat
Rating: PG-13
Characters/Pairings: Hound, Mirage, several OC Decepticons
Summary: Hound can see underneath the cold exterior that Mirage uses to protect himself. Knowing what's wrong doesn't make helping him any easier, however.
Warnings: Violence
A/N: Thanks goes to naggingfishwife for betaing. As she noted, this is my longest chapter yet. The ( Read more... )

mirage, fanfic, transformers, winter coat, hound, g1

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femme4jack February 1 2011, 15:29:49 UTC
Very exciting, and fascinating to see Mirage before he is the skilled, deadly spy he becomes. Hound is wonderful, of course.

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diamondunicorn February 1 2011, 16:36:22 UTC
Thank you ^_^

I have a real love for inexperienced Mirage, in both senses of the word XD

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__wilderness__ February 1 2011, 15:54:51 UTC
Nonononono! You can't stop it there

*grins* Awesome chapter. I'm so glad Hound found Mirage... though was there any doubt he would?

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diamondunicorn February 1 2011, 16:38:55 UTC
Oh trust me, I could've been muuuch eviler with the cliffhanger. I'm kinda regretful I wasn't, but I think the idea I originally had is kinda done a lot, so I decided to stop it here.

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kookaburra1701 February 1 2011, 17:54:38 UTC
Eeek! I can't wait to see how they get out of this one - and I have to admit, Hound's bluff even took me in along with the Decepticons. I was thinking that Mirage would be even more despised if the Autobots had to risk themselves to save his aft from the 'Cons.

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diamondunicorn February 2 2011, 00:08:40 UTC
Gotta love Hound's holograms. You just know he's not the sort to sit and wait for back up when someone's in trouble. So of course he makes his own back up ^_^

Unfortunately, just because Mirage avoided being the center of discontent for this doesn't mean there isn't plenty more to come for the others to get angry at him for. *Diabolical grin*

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onyx17 February 1 2011, 18:15:11 UTC
Great chapter! :D The idea of Mirage coming face-to-face with a 'Con only for him to be seen as a killer was real interesting. Thank goodness he's got his heroicly-stupid Hound to back him up though!

Can't wait to see what happens next :3

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diamondunicorn February 2 2011, 02:22:55 UTC
Thank you ^_^

I think heroically stupid is my new favorite phrase. It describes almost all of the Autobots so well. And it is a good thing Mirage has Hound, not only as back up, but someone to make sure he doesn't get all mopey.

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anavidbookworm February 2 2011, 13:50:44 UTC
Excellent chapter. I think the ending was very well placed. You get some closure from the initial capture but the cliffhanger setup with Hound going off is a great incentive to come back for more.

I also loved that even though Mirage is inexperienced he is not defenseless and can kick the crap out of at least one decepticon with his hands tied behind his back.

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diamondunicorn February 2 2011, 14:25:06 UTC
Thank you ^_^

I initially had a much more evil cliffhanger in mind, but then I realized the chapter was getting pretty long, and I wanted to leave some story for the next one, and the sort of cliffhanger I had in mind is done a lot. This one worked out better; although, all of the big 'NOOO's would've been hilarious.

Haha, Mirage can now point to evidence that he can beat someone with at least one hand tied behind his back XD I have a little bit of personal cannon that Mirage had some previous self-defense training, mostly in aiming for weak points in his attacker and using his opponent's weight and own movements against them.

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