Fic: Winter Coat (3/?)

[diamondunicorn]

Title: Winter Coat
Rating: G
Characters/Pairings: Hound, Mirage, Red Alert and a brief appearance by Inferno
Summary: Hound can see underneath the cold exterior that Mirage uses to protect himself. Knowing what's wrong doesn't make helping him any easier, however.
Warnings: None

Comments

[ex_naggingf]

Oops Hound! Insert foot in mouth much? lol

It was kind of Red Alert to give Hound some great advice. I can't wait to see how Hound puts it to use.

Good chapter...I'm looking forward to more ♥

[diamondunicorn]

Haha, unfortunately for Hound, Mirage is not one for teasings concerning sex by someone he's been speaking to for like three days XD He'll learn.

Thanks for commenting, and I'm glad you enjoyed it ^_^

[femme4jack]

This continues to be a really enjoyable story with great characterizations. I loved the interaction with Red Alert, and Mirage deciding that being clean was more important than trying to stop Hound's overtures. Can't wait to read the next installment.

[diamondunicorn]

Hehe, I can imagine Mirage being somewhat obsessed with personal cleanliness. Thanks for commenting ^_^

[convall]

Just wanted to tell you that I love this story.
Looking forward to the next chapter.

[diamondunicorn]

Thank you ^_^

[__wilderness__]

I love that Hound went to Red Alert for advice. And Mirage's response to Hound's quip had me laughing out loud!

[diamondunicorn]

I figure that since Red's always watching everyone misunderstand each other and screw up relationships, he secretly enjoys finally getting to provide some advice.

[kookaburra1701]

Really loving this! Oh, dear, Hound - I might have done the same thing Mirage did if someone I didn't know was so forward with me!

[diamondunicorn]

Hehe, I loved writing that part XD I wanted Hound to say something that would be inappropriate, but not so offensive that he looked like a complete ass. Poor mech's just used to being less censored with his teasing.