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Apr 15, 2010 13:50

title: i've dreamt my life in dreams
summary: Edward is consumed by his own dreams; Bella is haunted by other people's. Together they try to find a way out of their waking nightmare. 
warning: rated R for scenes containing physical and sexual abuse. Read with CAUTION. Also strong language.

a oneshot, separated into parts.

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kalimando April 15 2010, 23:03:24 UTC
Amazing chapter. I must admit, I'm sad that there are only a total of 5. I really love how both Bella and Edward are suffering (and I feel that's a fair statement) with the same dreams.

Your take on Esme is very interesting and not one I've seen before. I'm accustomed to reading about an Esme that is completely family oriented so it's refreshing to read something different.

I'm looking forward to seeing how Edward and Bella figure out that the dreams are happening to the both of them.

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diamondqull April 15 2010, 23:13:45 UTC
Thank you. I've always felt that canon!Esme was simply very lucky; she could have fallen so far, had it not been for Carlisle. I wanted to explore that a little further.

I love that you're reading this right now and commenting each chapter, it makes the feedback so much more immediate :)

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beluc April 16 2010, 02:53:52 UTC
I feel sad about both Edward and Bella, their parents seem to live in their own world, totally disconnected to the suffering of their kids.

It's difficult for me to imagine not being able to do regular activities because of Bella's ability, to always take precaution, to always have that huge weight not letting her do what she wants.

I'd like to congratulate you, it's an interesting, INTERESTING story. Thanks :D

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