Chapter Four, Seducing Ms Swan

[diamondqull]

Title:Seducing Ms Swan
Summary: Post-New Moon AU. Bella never jumped, Alice never had her vision and Edward never came back. Six years later, Bella is struggling to make a new life for herself as a teacher in Rochester, New York. How will she fare when a very familiar student crops up in her classroom? Will she be able to remain professional, or

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[labyrinthcookie]

I love this.

I seriously cannot wait for the next chapter :)

Oh, Edward, you should have just kissed her!

::hangs head in shame:: I'm a huge Zoolander fan...and I missed the reference. However, in my defense, I was skimming some of the words eager to see what Edward would do.

[diamondqull]

xD Thanks!

Omg I looove Zoolander. I couldn't help but stick that line in; it made me giggle no end. As did the extreme *foreshadowing* moment which is oh so significant to me but none of the readers will make the connection to until like chapter 13. Bwahaha yes I'm cruel.

Thanks so much for the review! <33

[chrippin]

Just wanted to say that I agree that Edward is really, really, ridiculously good looking. Can I get my cookie now? =)

Now I'm looking for the foreshadowing.

[ohfiyera]

you emanate brilliance.

true story.

[diamondqull]

you and your supportiveness single handedly saved this chapter.

true story.

♥

[baphnexx]

You've completely made my day. True story!
I adored this chapter, this story, you, Edward's hair, etc.
I'll be waiting happily to fan girl the next chapter!
<3

[diamondqull]

Yay, I have a fangirl! *grins happily*

I'm writing chapter five as we speak :)

[appletini_85]

YES!!!!!

I've pathetically been checking to see if this fic had been updated twice a day since you posted the last chapter and this update was NOT a disappointment.

I love the way you write Bella she's completely in character (as was Edward in chapter 3). I find with a lot of future twilight fic people tend to write Bella as though she's a totally different person but you've really got down how I imagined she would be if Edward never returned in New Moon.

You're an amazing writer and I'm now anxiously waiting for the next update. :)

[diamondqull]

Thankyou very much! I'm so glad you like the story :D I'm currently writing chapter five. I really want to finish it by tomorrow evening because from Sunday onwards I'll be a way from a computer for five days (eek!) and therefore unable to update!

Thanks for the review :)

[winchesterjo]

EEEEEK!

Of course it was GOOD! All of it has been GOOD!

You might feel it's not good, as a personal opinion, because it's human nature to always want to better yourself. .Even if you are already, TOTALLY AWESOME.

Loved it!!!

[diamondqull]

YOU ARE TOTALLY AWESOME TOO AND I LOVE YOU! <33

[winchesterjo]

I LOVE YOU TOO, HUN!

MWAH!

*throws kisses*