Warum? Darum! 3/3

Feb 05, 2010 01:10

I'm thinking people aren't going to like this ending but it's what was in my head. I figure that matters more than trying to make the muses do something else just because they're acting up.

Linke and Jan have been roommates for years without a hitch. Now Linke wants out and Jan wouldn't listen to why even if Linke decided to tell him.

Warum? Darum! 3/3 )

fandom: panik, franky/juri, linke/jan

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mieka_writes February 5 2010, 14:55:55 UTC
awww...

the ending works, it's cute.. the silly noises game and the flirting.. My imagination is more than up for filling in the snuggling and play that comes after...

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di_glossia February 5 2010, 15:05:58 UTC
So okay? It just feels so bleh and I don't want to disappoint.

I found something you might like on devianart the other day.

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mieka_writes February 5 2010, 15:48:49 UTC
it doesn't go straight to porn.. which while porn is fun doesn't fit the feel of the story. the silly then off screen does.

hee.. kitty grin..

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di_glossia February 5 2010, 15:53:33 UTC
Thought you'd like this one, especially.

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di_glossia February 5 2010, 15:55:12 UTC
Thank you. <3 It's a fun game, especially if you go out into different language ranges.

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angelshadows696 February 5 2010, 21:34:04 UTC
i like the ending. it was cute. the story made me smile. i loved it.

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di_glossia February 7 2010, 01:17:07 UTC
Well, thank you!

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subtlemagic February 8 2010, 00:19:52 UTC
I'm a bit tired so not entirely coherent but I loved it.:)

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